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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

person Anon
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what Harry does next. To get out, get his kids, etc To find out the real traitor eventually...
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GO HARRY GET YOUR REVENGE. Please make them all pay horribly. Especially DRACO.
Please let Harry have his children back and please have the healer tell the children about Harry.
Also make sure Harry has a happy ending.
Please update soon.
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so poor harry had to spend years in a cell being raped i do hope he gets his children back and they all pay and fines some one to love him
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY Harry goes on the warpath!!! Cannot wait for him to escape and kick Voldie's butt then all those who betrayed him!
person Bloodsuckingmonster3 FAM
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Epic, just epic, I'm rolloing around, begging for more and loving the little ones, hope Harry will be okay, although, I like the idea of a 'dark' Harry. But I'm just messed up and a bad guy lover! :3
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope the voices were just some weird hallucination because I think its rather despicable for his parents to blatantly lie to Harry about who had his children, not to mention the Healer and his wife's intentions of what essentially amounts to kidnapping. There is no honor you can pretend to have when a Healer disregards the wishes of the parent. Lying, conspiring, its all the same in this- though obviously it would work to force Harry back into the magical world and if he would choose to abandon the traitorous Wizards to their fate then you would need some blackmail to keep him compliant.... I'm just hoping for Harry to learn from the betrayal of his family and friends and become stronger for it, it would be a shame if he continues on in his hopeless weakness and forgive them out of some desperate delusions that they really care about him. I'm interested to see how you will make Harry grow from this though it will be interesting to read about a wimpy Harry's downward spiral too.
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So glad for another quick and amazing update! Hope for more soon! :)
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
when you get harry clear can you make it so that he can get his kids back beause i still don't want that healers wife to keep them.
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is i am hooked. you like break my heart for harry and his babies and yet you go in give me hope dame your good. hope that harry will fine a true love get his babies back defeated voldemort and not forgive those who hurt him want more this so good. and gets his back and more. update yes please
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh thank goodness for james and lily potter. for a moment i thought harry was lost to the world. on another note thanks for the update.