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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
After reading all the reviews, the babies are no longer babies anymore. Harry has been in for 7 yrs (according to Draco's talk with his father) so they are approximately 6 yrs old. My first thought when Harry was talking to his parents after they said that the babies would suffer was Harry to say
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now isn't that sweet? NOT!!! What does he think, he can just lock Harry up for 7 years of hell and torment where absolutly every thing has been lost, but now that we know he's innocent (not that they were wrong) they can get him out and put him under the care of some mind healers and it will be as if nothing ever happened. " VENGEANCE IS MINE " says Harry, and I say have at it!!!
Very good chapter, can't wait to see what is to come, wish you could update sooner? Thank you so much for the good read.
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You really need to update more lol - each chapter is just...ugh it's like one epic storm of awesomeness!!!
person dominique1
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dame poor harry know they believe him after 7 years i do hope that harry's freed as soon as possible i hope he gets his babies back they would be 6 about now but i don't know if he should take draco back because he didn't believe and harry for one thing and longbottom should die looking forward to another update i'm still lean toward harry finding a new love. beside i just want harry out and with his children and sane
person dominique1
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just one more thing would it have been to much for the Dr to tell harry s kids about him because they supposedly went into hiding and am wondering if the guard wasn't Neville raping harry
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Longbottom of all people! tht's crazy
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so loving harry right now. i do hope he castrate every last grad that rape him, though it is better then they deserve; at the very lest he will know they will never do it again. i can not wait to see what he does when he gets out. i do hope there was some one out there fighting for him so he can have love, he deserve it. i also hope he gets his babies. they probable don't know their real parent.-_-' but i get there young the doctor will have some excuse. i really hope you update soon.
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i re read the story and i must say his parents and fate suck its all on harry shoulder and when he does die i hope he treats his parents like shit because other than his children his left with nothing i do hope he doesn't escape i want him proven innocent than he can destroy everyone
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder where the warden is? Harry was strong before so I kept thinking, "why isn't he at least trying to do wandless magic", but I guess if your suffering with extreme depression it makes sence. "GO HARRY"!!!!
I can't believe that his parents would tell him he had to suffer for so long to prove himself? Like saying it was for 'The Greater Good', so f***** up! Really!!! Well I hope you can update soon, looking forward to seeing someone else suffer for a while. Waiting for the Reckoning. Can't wait to see what you have planned for this story.Keep up the good work.
person Jan
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I feel very sorry for Harry, I can't wait to see what he is going to do to all those that betrayed him, more so Draco. Nor can I wait to see what his reunion to his children will be like. Wi8ll it be a happy one, or will they reject him at first(Gods, I hope not. that will be heartbreaking).

Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

Jan