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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn.... I love the story. I just wish the chapters were longer.. But I suppose the frequent updates makes up for it. It's just, they're soooooo short. It's hard to really sink my teeth into it. I'd almost rather wait a few more days, or whatever, for more text. But I love the story and I can't wait for Harry to take charge again. I really can't see Harry ever forgiving Draco again and if he does, I hope that Harry really makes him work for it. Snape is such a fucking ass and Dumbly needs a good bitch slapping. I really hope Harry takes them all to task. But, I guess he has to deal with Voldie first ^_^
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
TEASE!!!! This was the moment I was waiting for since Harry's parents visted him in a 'dream' REALLY TRUELY looking forward to the next chatper(s) :)
person Mishi Gohiku
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man it's just getting to the good part too really wish you'd update please
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry's gonna get them...I cannot wait!!!
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooo. I hope that he doesn't forgive or forget.. I also hope that the rapes he's suffered are listed in his file Bbut NOT anything on him giving birth.

Keep up the good work.

SM
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I do wish your chapters were longer. The way the warden has ignored the rapes of Harry when you have him trying to stop it during the pregnancy is a little confusing as if Harry got pregnant the first time what would stop him from pregnant again?
person Jan
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I care not that Draco suffer after Harry was taken, what he did was unforgivable!!! He says he loved Harry, yet was quick to throw him to the wolves with out a backwards glance, without a care that Harry was being raped left and right even while he was with child! That's not love honey. And Severus talks about Draco's self destruction, but what of Harry's? I can't wait to see what a fool he will feel when it is known the real reason for Harry's refusal to the truth potion.

Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

Jan
person cleo
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I didn't thought to read this story so far, for usually I don't like the 'poor-harry-thrown-in-Azkaban-with-triplet-(why, why, why always three????)for-a-crime-he-never-committed' stories. But I did and I like it.
I just hope these last chapters about Draco and how he suffered for Harry's betrayal doesn't go straight to 'Harry must forgive Draco, because at the end both of them are victims'... because they aren't: Harry is the victim, point.
Sure, Neville is the traitor, but Draco is a traitor too, the worst for he betrayed the one he said he loved. What Draco had done, or hadn't done - for he never wanted to listen to Harry, nor wanted to believe him - it's not love, it's betrayal and there isn't easy forgiveness for this kind of betrayal.
I really hope Harry will not be his usual goody two shoes self to forgive all the Order's hypocrites and forget that HE is the victim.
Update soon.
person dominique1
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just because Draco tried to kill himself so what harry has died over and over again i do hope that he freed the next chapter so he can start getting better and get his baby for the love of god harry s been without them long enough and i still say that harry should be with someone else betrayal is just that it would have been diffident if he believed in harry but he doesn't deserve harry are even having kids with someone else
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how Draco and everyone is gearing up on the assumption that Harry will take him back with open arms. Seriously, I can't wait until the fallout when Harry owns all of them