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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. please write more. will harry see his babies again.
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
now that i've caught up i have to say i feel no sympathy for draco. i think he's suffer but it was his own doing so he only have his self to blame and his parents and godfather are going to need a reality check, especially severus. now i can't wait to see how the meeting gos and i hope he castrate all those guards in the future. update soon.
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah harry out i do hope poppy report show that harry has been raped but also let the pain begin i so can't wait for him to hurt them all and albus should die i also hope that harry can suit the ministry of magic
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
we so need more i want them to know that harry was pregnant they don't need to know that the babies are alive i want harry to give as much pain as the gave him severus really needs to pull the stick out of his ass beside harry should have the money from sirius and his parent i pray that he gets everything he needs from them than goes to 12gp and i just want everyone to die i don't want draco with him bond are not bond i want the malfoys to feel the pain of losing their grandchildren and draco his children i want everyone else to just die the greater good my ass i want harry with his kids and voldemort and albus and his greater good destroyed please don't leave harry at hogwarts long that sad part is you just might do thatupdatesoon
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short, short, tooooooooo short!!! I was waiting for a big, succulent chapter with the reunion and I get this little chapter... sob! sob!
I hope the next'll be a little more, possibly with Draco and the other supposed friends, but I'm glad Harry's planning revenge: they all deserve it... especially Draco. I think it's better the children stay hidden for a little while. If the Malfoys would find out three little heirs they could try to get complete control over them (Lucius already despise Harry and certainly he'd welcome a chance to have a new generation of Malfoy without having Potter and we know Severus will gladly help him against the boy) and while Harry's playing the weak and broken boy he wouldn't have the chance to prevent it, whereas Draco and his lovely, supporting family have to pay dearly for their betrayal.
I hope the next'll be a little more, possibly with Draco and the other supposed friends, but I'm glad Harry's planning revenge: they all deserve it... especially Draco. I think it's better the children stay hidden for a little while. If the Malfoys would find out three little heirs they could try to get complete control over them (Lucius already despise Harry and certainly he'd welcome a chance to have a new generation of Malfoy without having Potter and we know Severus will gladly help him against the boy) and while Harry's playing the weak and broken boy he wouldn't have the chance to prevent it, whereas Draco and his lovely, supporting family have to pay dearly for their betrayal.
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so not like the gang rape it like you've allowed him to keep his mind and yet you destroyed his body and soul. his body by the rapes and abuse and his soul by taking away his babies and everyone thinks the are just going to get harry and that enough and albus no worst for ware your kidding right he was just gang rape and that ass master albus is acting like he stub his toe the ward said harry had to leave with them are be what i call rape in torture until the M.O.M. sent someone else please i would have left the moment i reach land i would have gone to 12 or the goblins to help secure a place while those bastards read his file anyway you know it a good story when your read read your review please update i hate the cl-iffy
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The description of the pain and separation of the two son and his girl is impresive. I cry all the 4 chapter.
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i am sooooooooooooo hoping this comes back to bite them. sactimonious pricks
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good story! What Harry goes through is so heartbreaking. The Wizarding world's law system sucks- guilty until proven innocent?! I'm glad Draco suffered while Harry was in prison (it's his own fault for betraying and not trusting the person he supposedly loves). Harry may very well forgive Draco, but I hope it's not for a long time......