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This chapter was a lot better, it had more detail and what seemed to be a more conscience thought process.

Excellent work here! The plot thickens, wonder how the Wizarding World reacted when Harry's power erupted? Can only imagine all the crazy witches and wizards trying to get in Gringotts haha

Ok! I'm a bit disappointed. I knew it was too good to last: well written, good plot, Harry finally not so forgiving as always in this kind of stories.
And then that's it: the supernatural (in this case maybe it's better 'supermagical') stuff. Like it is impossible for Harry to achieve his goals without some extra-power from his heritage. A pity, really.
I'll keep on reading the story - I really want to see if Draco and Severus and Lucius will grovel to Harry - but I fear it have lost most of its appeal. Best wishes.

so harry has a great grandfather i like what harry said maybe harry could get his kids and have them stay with his grandfather and i can't wait until the malfoys find out about the grand children that going to be good

Question albus has his medical records that will cover the birth of his children and rape's
if the order is at g12 than the black family tree should show them on there.is sirius and remus apart of the order accusing harry if not where are they will the guards pay for what they did to harry. i know this must be small but its like your leaving lose ends and than you bring a grandfather into the mix he would be able to help harry with hiding his children and even getting them back. harry s snapping at everyone but theres no real power behind it. other than him calling herimone a mudblood and telling snape he kill him.its like your chasing your tail adding brilliant plots but not tying them together.
harry in prison
harrys rape
harry has babies
harrys free
harry at hogwarts
harrys at gringotts
harry meet a gggrandfather
and why hasn't any one ask about his health poppy has check him for diease she should at less see him and know his file, understand all the weasley turn their back on harry as well as the order but where remus and sirius want more soon

wow, not that i blame him but theres got to be someone who can help Harry with his bitter, i hate everyone attitude. btw, is he going to go find his kids? Now that he knows the Malfoys can find out, they're going to need better protection.

You were doing really well until your brought in the so called great-grandfather. After all if being an Elemental is so powerful why didn't they find him right after Harry came into his inheritance? I do agree with one reviewer that you are leaving a few too many holes in your story. Maybe a few side paragraphs of Hermione or Rons POV on how they plan on getting Harry to trust in them again? Hopefully you won't make Harry some super power person. I can see how an air elemental might suit him as he was an excellent flyer.

This is great and its excellent that Harry hasn't forgiven them and he shouldn't.

Please give Harry his children back though and have the children know all about Harry and that he's their dad. Also I still don't like the healers wife, so please get rid of her and as long as the healer is nice and tells the children about Harry I don't mind if he lives.

Please update soon I love this story.

will that was kind of nice want more

Three hurra for Harry!!!!
Yeeesss! Oh, I'm sooo happy that he's starting to explain a little bit of reality to everyone!
'Harry, you're changed': oh, really??? Well... you know... seven years in hell can do that... wanna try???
Oh, tell me that little shit of Draco was there too, pleeease!