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Is there a way to know when you update the story?
Or should i check every ither day to se if it was updated?
Thanks!

I am really enjoying this, but sometimes I lose track of who is speaking. I like all the dialogue, but I need a 'Harry said' or something.

i spent the last two day celebrating my birthday it was nice i did hope there would be at least two chapter update but at last not i loved it harry taking action i do hope severus tells everyone what happen to harry and the guard she be in prison themselves harry needs his babies looking forward to draco finding out about his children i do hope that harry gets full right to his children and the malfoy are entitle to none can someone kill severus want more please love it

Great chapter. I like where you are taking this story, though I am waiting for the denouncement scene where everyone finds out about the babies.
A correction you might wish to make is

go Harry go. Those prick bastards deserve nothing less.

Interesting twist - I expected Harry to sort of become a war chirf like Dumbledore and Voldemort and make a third side in the war, yet he is legally going after those in the Light side that wronged him. I expect he'll play dirty though when it comes to the Dark Lord haha.

Keep up the great work!

I find it good that you decided to mention some of Dumblefuck's planning through out the years.... but don't you think that an entire chapter of his boring mussing to be a bit much?

Anyways please update chapter 16 soon, can't wait to see what Harry is going to do next.

Jan

Oh... My... Gosh... i cried and cried when those babies were taken from Harry. i cried from when they were taken all the way to chapter 10 probably. It was sooooooo sad!!! :'( Please tell me Harry gets his precious children back? After everything, in the end, he should be able to have his babies back. If nothing else, Harry should have his life back... Right? And as much as i'm trying not to, and i hate to say it... i feel bad for Draco and kind of... sort of... maybe want him to find a way to win himself back into Harry's good graces...? :/ The rest of them, Harry can have vengeance on. :) Just as long as he doesn't kill them... or torture them... or maim them... Screwing up their lives is good! Like framing them for crimes-ok, that's horrible, but i'm trying to throw out ideas here. Um... they could always really be doing something that could get them fired from their job, or sent to prison and Harry could just out them? Ideas... ideas... Well, i'm excited to read whatever you come up with-even if it is torture... :/ :) Please write more soon! i really enjoy your story! :D

Glad to see some of the unknown manipulations coming to light now! Great work here, loved it!

still go but their so many thing i want albus dead and harry with his babies