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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay Luna's going to make her way into the story! That makes me very happy. I love your Voldemort--he's a little OOC but not annoyingly so.
I always love with the evil bastards have the hots for the main female character within a story--does that make me demented or something? Oh well ...
Any who, I am addicted to your story and have been using it to procrastinate from homework lol
Keep up the good work. Your doing a fabulous job without a beta!
Until your next chapter!
Love,hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
I always love with the evil bastards have the hots for the main female character within a story--does that make me demented or something? Oh well ...
Any who, I am addicted to your story and have been using it to procrastinate from homework lol
Keep up the good work. Your doing a fabulous job without a beta!
Until your next chapter!
Love,hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the quick update, is it greedy of me to ask for more?....probably but I will anyway, please update soon :D Xx
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering our pleas!!
I find it interesting that Voldemort has become so protective of Hermoine.
Can't wait for more.
I find it interesting that Voldemort has become so protective of Hermoine.
Can't wait for more.
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. You have so many things brewing that it should be very interesting. I find myself kind of hoping that she stays with them. Maybe Merlin put her in that house to get her away from the mind tricks being played by the "light" side. After all, they would not want to lose such a brilliant mind and powerful witch. Wonder what spell they used to get her to faint when she did a spell? Looking forward to the next chapter. p
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love, Love, LOVE this fic! I'm really glad there's a dual plot going here. I'm all for smut, but it's always so much better when coupled with a great story. And can I say - YAY Luna! She always keeps things interesting. I'm guessing Luna's part Fae and Marcus is part troll? Must admit I'm hoping this is a bit of magical biological warfare kicked off by the Order that's gone horribly wrong. Can't wait for another update!
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*pouts and grumbles* Fine I'll do my homework after I'm done with this review though I REALLY don't want to I will because you added Luna into the story and I can feel your mom glare through the computer screen :D
Great chapter, I can't wait for more but I promise to do my homework BEFORE reading the next chapter--I could try to trick you but I know better. Mom's have that second sense about these things.
Until then!
Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
Great chapter, I can't wait for more but I promise to do my homework BEFORE reading the next chapter--I could try to trick you but I know better. Mom's have that second sense about these things.
Until then!
Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Albus...you are going to be in SO MUCH trouble!!!!
Well, Hermoine might not want to be bent over a desk and taken by every man in the house...but I WOULD!!!!! *getting all hot and bothered just thinking about it*
Well, Hermoine might not want to be bent over a desk and taken by every man in the house...but I WOULD!!!!! *getting all hot and bothered just thinking about it*
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story on AFF I've ever reviewed. I'm completely sucked in and appreciate the frequent updates. You've created quite the series of mysteries and picked quite the cast of characters. I always appreciate a manipulative Albus plot. Cant wait for more. Thank you for the time you put into your story.
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I actually wondered what would happen should Hermione and the others be stuck togethor with no magic. Love it. <3 I'm so happy you updated again. Never stop writing.
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, please update soon Xx