rate_review Reviews

This story is nice!!! Very fluffy!

Oh, that was so sweet. I absolutly love it!

Really cute little fic. Makes me want to see more of those two's life together... Poor Harry definitely needs patience with such a prissy Draco. Snape too, for that matter. :)

I enjoyed "PDLM" - nice job! If you feel like writing another HP fic, it would be interesting to see a bit of back-story (particularly the bit about Harry convincing Draco to start a relationship with him).

The only part of this fiction that seemed a bit off was Draco's motivation for leaving Harry in the dark for a solid week. As I understand it, Draco was ashamed that he'd acted impetuously in drinking the potion and getting stuck. That reasoning's a little flimsy for abanoning one's lover (and mother, and friends) for a full week without any word. If you want to make that believable, I think you should go into Draco's emotional state a bit more. Show exactly how and why he's humiliated by either a)being trapped in an animal body or b)acting "like a Gryffindor". Maybe it's related to his traumatic experience as a ferret during his 4th year. Maybe during his fight with Harry at the beginning, Harry gives him grief for acting Gryffindorish, and the idea of proving his lover right is simply too much to face. Just take some time to explore Draco's reasoning.

Thanks for writing!

Wonderful first story! You did a wonderful job of giving enough plot and details without overloading the story with them. Bravo! Although I do admit that I would like a second chapter or perhaps a sequel...

As a first story this was really good as well as your writing style. I loved the idea, it was really cute and even had me a little tearful near the end. I hope to see many more story from you =^.^=

I loved it. It made me sad to see Harry that upset, but you really pulled them off. I would love to read more on them or any of your other works.

Aww that was so cute, great job I hope you write more fics.