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May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest of the story? This is too good a start to just leave it.
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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like Draco, you have intrigyed me with your opening chapter - thanks - I look forward to the next one.
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good reading so far, looking forward to see where it all goes.
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like where you have this story headed so far...interesting point on how easily we lie to ourselves. The only major comment that I have is that you have Draco nodding goodbye to Blaise in the Great Hall, only to have him sit next to him in potions. That's a little confusing if you meant that Draco went wandering between the times, or you may have just changed your mind and not changed your text. Keep writing I'm interested to see where you take this.