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Yay! Two chapters in two days! I think I'm going to dance in front of my computer and celebrate! Good work, I love how the story is unfolding. I can't help but wonder if Dumbledore can actually see what Draco and Harry are doing since he could see what Snape and Harry were doing ... hm. And Luna! I hope you put more of her into the story--she's such a great character and she's the only person I can think of who would make Voldemort scratch his head in confusion.

And as always with my chapter by chapter begging in reviews "Please let Harry become part of the Dark Lords army!"

I love your characters--please dont stop writing this story!

Until next chapter!

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18

Very interesting, can't wait for more.

All your stories are just amazing... I just have registered ( at last) so I can tell you how wonderful writer you definitely are..I am sitting before my PC all the time and am waiting for new chapters of your stories. Please, please, keep updating soon !!! thank you !

I've been very busy lately and while still checking for updates 3 times a day I haven't reviewed. It's disappointing that you don't update quite as frequently anymore but understandable. I'm still loving the stories. (Especially this one) and... Well I don't really remember what I wanted to say so I'll leave it at this.

Love this story! I always get so excited when I see an update! I'm really liking this Death Eater Hermione!

Loving Hermione taking control!

Okay I'll admit, it took me about three days after reading the new chapter to review--but at least I reviewed right???

Wow so much is happening in the story. Voldemort is falling in love (he would curico me if he found out I said that wouldn't he?) and he's getting very possessive of Snape. I really hope Voldemort decides to kidnap Harry and give him to Snape as a toy (hint hint!!!!) but I can understand if he simply kills Harry (insert sad face).

And you write slash very well. I don't go out voluntarily to read it usually but its nice to see it so well written in a Heterosexual based story.

Any who, keep up the good work! I really am enjoying!

Until your next chapter!

Love, hugs, and kisses
Koolgirl18

I really feel for Severus. He's so needy and wanting, so eager to please, but he always ends up messing up or losing out. Maybe things will turn around for him soon?

Also, I'm surprised Voldemort isn't more suspicious of the prophecy. I mean really, Dumbledore just happens to be the only one who hears the most important prophecy of the last 50 years (yeah, I know it was overheard by a "spy") and then he keeps the seer locked up away from the general public for the next 15+ years. Is it possible to fake or manipulate a prophecy? Dumbledore was bestest friends with the previous dark lord, so he would know how to play up the fears of one. It feels like Dumbledore is playing the long game with small manipulations here and there until he gets exactly what he wants with no one the wiser.

Oh, did Voldemort remember to obliviate Bella? She could really mess things up for Hermione. Hermione may get a chance to try out some of those curses in a "real life" situation. And god, she would go bonkers if she stumbled upon all the muggles in the lab.

I have to admit I went through a bit of withdrawal these last few days before the new chapter. It's just I've been so spoiled by your update frequency and there are so few good Hermione/Voldemort (or anyone/Voldemort) writers/stories around. Please don't burn out and I hope your move went well!

Love the dynamic between Hermione, Severus, and the Dark Lord. I was kinda disappointed when you so abruptly threw Severus out earlier in the story. It is a very interesting backstory though, his relationship with DL. But, please no more snarry. The one chapter almost made me give this story up too. If you must go that way - please give a head's up. I can't abide reading it, so I would rather not get any more invested in this tale if that is going to happen. I really do like your writing style though....very nice!!

I really love your story! It's very interesting and original. Thanks!