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Wow, I'm really loving this story. Its getting pretty complicated though, which I am totally okay with, but I have read your other stories and noticed that (I don't think) you haven't finished any of them. Maybe you have already finished but just haven't posted yet, or you have outlines or something of how the story is going to go, but as constructive criticism, maybe narrowing down the plot conflicts and subplots that come up would be helpful to finding an end to a story. I mean, I don't want to encourage you to stop writing a story before it feels like it is 'over' to you, but I know that leaving things unfinished is unsatisfying. So anyway, just a thing to think about.

Wow, this story is getting complicated really quickly. Whatever happens, at least let Dumbledore have a very excruciating death for his treachery! You know, usually, I would be so upset and distraught over what happened at the end of this chapter. But after I remembered what Draco did to that girl and how arrogant he was about it, I actually SMILED when he came across Travers. I hope the little bastard gets everything he deserved. I hope you update soon with more Voldemort & Hermione interaction.

I can't tell you how excited I was when I saw this story updated. It's one of my favorites! I wonder who is pretending to be Hermione. Could it be Ginny? That will be creepy since she talked about sleeping with Ron. I love how Voldemort told Harry to only contact him when he really needed something or was in trouble. It's so bizarre to think of him being Harry's protector.

Draco freaked me out. Nuff said.

Hermione...I feel bad for her. She should totally get to cruciate Bella as retaliation! I hope she feels better soon.

Thanks!

I hope you haven't abandoned this story...it's great!

Okay so it took me forever to review but I just wanted to say "WHY WON"T YOU LET MY HARRY FINALLY BE IN A PRISON WITH VOLDEMORT!!!"

*breathes heavily* alright, I'm glad I finally got that out of my system lol

But on a more serious note what a great chapter. Everything is progressing nicely. I love how your not making everything all fluffy and how your not letting readers sway you to do something you don't want to do (yes readers does include me--I respect a writers creative nature after all).

Good job! I can't wait to read more!

Until next chapter!

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18

Poor Harry, I hope he gets away soon. That would be so funny having him fight on the side of Tom against Dumbledore. And poor Severus as well.

Love this story! Dumbledore really fucked up Severus' mind! Thanks for the update!

Evil Dumbledore! Poor Snape! But yay for Hermione not getting captured. Enjoying the story, as always!

OMG YOU SUCK SO MUCH!!! How could you do that to me??? *gets on my knees* I am begging you to let this work out--at least, in a semi light way where Voldemort kidnaps Harry and throws him in a prison cell so that he services all the Death Eaters (of course, Hermione will give him puppy eyes and he'll cave and put Harry in a separate room and only allow certain death eaters to be serviced by him).

OMG I can't wait to see what happens next!

You are a very cruel woman!

*shakes fist*

I'll be back don't you worry!

Until next chapter!

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! Ahhh, Lord Voldemort to the rescue (again)!

I was so not expecting that. Dumbledore is gonna be so pissed. Guess he should have called in those Aurors? But why was he worried when Harry went missing, if he knew Harry couldn't leave the wards? Was Dumbledore expecting Voldemort to take Harry?

I like how you are going about this new relationship between Harry and Draco. It feels organic and not too rushed. But I wonder how Snape will feel about it.

I hope you update this and Captive Audience soon; they are quickly becoming two of my favorite stories.