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September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying for an update, I've been regularly checking your author page here on AFF to see if you've updated any of your stories, because by this point I'm pretty sure I've read all of them save one or two(There's no denying you're a great story teller!).
I realize you must be hella busy, especially with the start of school again so I won't cry more than once. But yeah, dying here. No pressure though. lol <3
Did I mention you rock? *blush*
ps. I hope that adoring fans helps motivate you somewhat XD
I realize you must be hella busy, especially with the start of school again so I won't cry more than once. But yeah, dying here. No pressure though. lol <3
Did I mention you rock? *blush*
ps. I hope that adoring fans helps motivate you somewhat XD
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
;O *whispers urgently* update!
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September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! That was such an evil cliffhanger! I'm flailing in suspense dskfjshdfkjd and slightly incoherent!!
Anywho, decided to give this story a try because I liked your plots/writing in your others, and find I like this one even more than your others, in certain aspects at least. Although I love Precious Mudblood, I'm more of a monogamous relationship kinda gal lol, and poor Hermione is practically a whore in that story, great and entertaining as it is.
Although I'm a big fan of pretty!voldemort, because come on, Tom Riddle is effing hot (And I truthfully prefer his younger version... I don't really feel guilty for being shallow in this case) your Voldemort this time around is quite eerie and still so very impressive. He's not the perfect mary-sue evil either, which makes it more exciting and scary because you don't know if he\ll actually make a mistake now! Like he just did with Harry in this chapter. I absolutely gaped when he realized he'd made an error due to Hermione and turned to Crucio her! Bravo, truly!
I have so much more I'd like to comment on, but I have class early and I'm not entirely sure if you want to read much more of my rant, so I'll end it with, please please update! I love your other stories too, so please update them too!
- Moony
Anywho, decided to give this story a try because I liked your plots/writing in your others, and find I like this one even more than your others, in certain aspects at least. Although I love Precious Mudblood, I'm more of a monogamous relationship kinda gal lol, and poor Hermione is practically a whore in that story, great and entertaining as it is.
Although I'm a big fan of pretty!voldemort, because come on, Tom Riddle is effing hot (And I truthfully prefer his younger version... I don't really feel guilty for being shallow in this case) your Voldemort this time around is quite eerie and still so very impressive. He's not the perfect mary-sue evil either, which makes it more exciting and scary because you don't know if he\ll actually make a mistake now! Like he just did with Harry in this chapter. I absolutely gaped when he realized he'd made an error due to Hermione and turned to Crucio her! Bravo, truly!
I have so much more I'd like to comment on, but I have class early and I'm not entirely sure if you want to read much more of my rant, so I'll end it with, please please update! I love your other stories too, so please update them too!
- Moony
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I freaking hate Benji. I hope he dies a horrible death.
Hermione did not deserve to be crucio'ed. I really hope there's more Hermione in the next chapter, and I hope she get's a little of her gumption back. Her Sycophantic behavior is getting on my nerves. She's becoming useless.
Thanks for updating.
Hermione did not deserve to be crucio'ed. I really hope there's more Hermione in the next chapter, and I hope she get's a little of her gumption back. Her Sycophantic behavior is getting on my nerves. She's becoming useless.
Thanks for updating.
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Mione! and Draco... Very good chapter :D
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! Poor Hermione though, with that crazy, crazy man! I mean, you have done a really good job with their relationship, but you have also done a good job of showing that yeah, hes still all kinds of crazy and scary. Really love this story and can't wait to read more!!
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems it was only a matter of time until Voldy regressed to his constantly dissatisfied and easily-irritated-to-the-point-of-torture mode. It isn't just the torture, he gets irritated way too easily, and it's one of the things I find more annoying about this pairing. Hermione isn't the sort of person to put up with that type of behavior, but her personality here seems completely different from canon (though still in character with what was established in the first couple chapters).
I also can't imagine Voldy so much different either - we see him constantly torturing and disciplining his followers in canon - particularly books 4 and 7. He was different with Hermione before, but now in the last several chapters it's become apparent that the newness of the relationship is wearing off on him. The honeymoon is now over.
I am especially curious to seeing how Hermione will respond. Will it be in the same way as before, wondering what she did wrong? I certainly can't see her using her wand against him, but still hope she doesn't become any more of a doormat. It's one thing for her to be submissive to someone who treats her fairly well than someone who tortures her.
Also, will Voldy regret it? He's done several things in the recent chapters that he's regretted almost immediately. Also, what's the status with Harry? What will happen to him? Very curious to see where that goes.
The situation with Severus is particularly sad - it seems there's no hope. I hope Hermione is able to pull off a miracle because it doesn't seem like anyone else will solve it.
Look foward to reading more - hopefully soon. (Is that a subtle enough poke to update again?)
I also can't imagine Voldy so much different either - we see him constantly torturing and disciplining his followers in canon - particularly books 4 and 7. He was different with Hermione before, but now in the last several chapters it's become apparent that the newness of the relationship is wearing off on him. The honeymoon is now over.
I am especially curious to seeing how Hermione will respond. Will it be in the same way as before, wondering what she did wrong? I certainly can't see her using her wand against him, but still hope she doesn't become any more of a doormat. It's one thing for her to be submissive to someone who treats her fairly well than someone who tortures her.
Also, will Voldy regret it? He's done several things in the recent chapters that he's regretted almost immediately. Also, what's the status with Harry? What will happen to him? Very curious to see where that goes.
The situation with Severus is particularly sad - it seems there's no hope. I hope Hermione is able to pull off a miracle because it doesn't seem like anyone else will solve it.
Look foward to reading more - hopefully soon. (Is that a subtle enough poke to update again?)
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was a harable way to end the story i hate cliffs lol it's been forever since you updated any of your storys i was so happy when i saw this story update i hope you update really soon [:
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE! I LOVE THIS!
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July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That last part was nice and intense. I'm almost to the last chapter you wrote. :( I REALLY hope you update soon.