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for When His Screams Died

by Spacefille

person Anon
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice conclusion
dramatic. I liked the final quote
person sexonlegs
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!!! But: Two parts only???? Nice try ....

I'm going to wait for the next capters ....
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please don't stop there. These boys have such a beautiful story of recovery ahead of them. This is a really great story. I love it!
person Martel
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting so far. :)
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
pretty interesting chapter. your portrayal of lucius is quite frightening.
I like the relationship between harry and draco. how they comfort one another the best way they can considering their limitations.
can't wait for the next chapter.
person lies-d
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this was enjoyably dark and brutal. Sometimes a fic like that is much needed. Can't wait to see where this goes.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH no no no no no no no!!!! You absolutely can not end it there!!! How can you say that's the conclusion!!! There has to be more!! Does Harry succeed is reversing Draco's sentence? Does he get over his fear of the father so he can actually be with Draco in some way?? Come one!!! You can't leave this hanging, leave us with these questions!!! There has to be more... wait I said that already. But it still stands!!! Please, please, please, please, PLEASE!!!! This may be the first time I've ever REALLY begged for more to a story. You can't end it there!!!!! PLEEEEAAAAASE!!!!!!