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oh damn that was amazing

Very hot!! Needs a follow up. They have to catch her again. OR maybe she can catch them ;) I'd love to see them both at her mercy.

hahaha loved the ending, loved the whole lil story!

Heehee. Loved it! :-D

Yum, I liked that! There really aren't enough well-written threesome fics. Thanks. :)

Did someone turn the heating up? **fans self** great fic featuring my two favourite wizards.. Who wouldn't want to be the filling in that sandwich?

Just one crit of this story... I need more! ;)

Great work, thx for starting my day in such a "warming" way^^

Well, that was a wonderfully steamy and enjoyable read. Severus and Lucius are certainly my two favorite characters to see Hermione with and when you put the two of them together, it's just no contest. Add what you did to the story and it was just a sensual adventure. And with the way you ended it, it almost sounds like an opening for additional one-shot chapters if you are ever so inspired. I can just see all three of them scheming and giving chase and catching her again. Yes, that's this reader's not so subtle way of hopefully getting you to at least considering a continuance with this. It just seems like a fun idea to play with in between longer stories if you ever need a break. I just wanted to say though that I enjoyed the read and will probably be checking out your other Hermione and Lucius fic next. Take care.

Chapter 1: This was indisputably smoking hot. It

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