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for Loup-garou

by Lomonaaeren

person NightLo
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...facing with such relevation, and the changes that Harry has undergone, what will he do? Esp. he deliberately uses a dark spell against Draco, while he has done nothing to harm...BTW, will Harry be chased and charged with using Dark Spells?
person polka dot
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not really sure what happened there. But I guess Harry's kinda free now
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yippieh, loved!
person nightlo
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...a dangerous cliff hanger, and one possibly leading to hot and erotic action, please update sooner.
person SParker
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #7...8..

1. Harry clenched his teeth. Let me go, Malfoy.



I never will. Let me have you.



I never will.

--wow..for some reason, that slight standoff between
them seemed just as potent as ANY grand massacre they
could EVER do any other time. O_O

2. No offense to Harry, but I actually look forward to when
Harry sloooowly gives in, after all 'the wolf' won't make it
easy, while maintaining his feral nature.

3. Did I mention this is MY story???

person polka dot
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
draco is incredibly repressed he needs to watch some porn
person NightLo
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really fasciated by what Draco plans to do next, a more difficult and challenging chase, a more turn on for him? Also, right now he is enthralled by the magic and power, what if finally they can create and do the magic separately, what will he do next? He doesn't have the amibition to be the next dark lord, what will he do with such enormous power?

Also, does Harry understand what more he need to do to gain 'this' freedom? Even under an oath, he still needs to 'test/learn' the magic and power, but this time it is of his free will...will he feel more guilty of that?
person SParker
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #6..

I don't know what it is about this chapter..or story for that matter..but
it seems to pulse with sexual tension, whenever Draco walks into the room with Harry.

As a matter of fact, this whole series has a different vibe than anything else
you've written, it's like it stands out on its own in a whole 'nuther universe.

I like that though.

Anyway, I LONG for the day to read how Harry finally gives into Draco, of
course it will be with claws & teeth, after all Harry IS the 'wolf'. :-)
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, loved this chapter!
person NightLo
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such an offer, how will Harry response? BTW, will Ron and Hermione notice the absence of Harry? Have they followed him? Would Harry tell them what kind of connection and offer that Draco has proposed to them?