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Love this story, and all the others too, have you ever though about going back and finishing some of your old ones?

Yes, this story is not for the faint of heart!But I have to tell you I think your storytelling is simply amazing! These first 3 chapters have had me on the edge of my seat griping the arm rest just to see what is going to happen next! I don't know how I feel about Severus at this point and Seeing Hermione like this is so difficult. Even though she would rather be dead now I just now she'll turn out stronger in the end!! I can't wait for chapter 4!

This is one intense story. I would say I like it, but somehow 'like' seems the wrong word. It kills me to see Hermione like that. So much has happened and is still happening. When I saw you had a new chapter, I was almost afraid to read it. I have read some dark stories, but this is dark in a whole different way. The rape was very bad, but what happens afterwards is very hard. Instead of truly escaping she is trapped with her rapist who tries to heal her with such barbaric means (well at least comparing it with magical means).
Very well written story and very intense.

My God this gets better and better! For a moment I hated him while he was cutting her hair! I felt a tear slip from my own eye. He doesn't seem to realize he's taken something else from her, It's just hair to him. I wonder how she'll ever forgive him. Even if he did do all this to save her how do you forgive this. At this time I can understand why she wishes she was dead. What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger and hopefully Hermione will become a force to be reckoned with! Once again a fabulous chapter. You are truly a gifted writer!

interesting... I'd like to see where it goes.

its interesting to see how this story will change the outcome of the war against voldemort. I always enjoy to see how the relationship btw people will develop. the only problem i had was how you portrayed Draco cause in the book he was petrified when seeing things like torture. I know he wouldn't do anything to change the situation because he's a coward, but he wouldn't be outspoken by insulting the victim. Rather, i think he would be trying to withdraw from it as much as possible or disturbed by what is happening in front of him and unable to look away.

Poor Hermione. :( Well, I think Severus did all this cos he was forced to, and now he's trying to save her. :)

Keep going, please! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Kisses. ;***

Bravo!! You said it would be dark and you did not dissapoint.

Now, what happens next? I can bearly wait.