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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow... really well written, thank you! You portrayed his reluctance in the first chapter marvelously. Though chapters 2-4 were getting a little tiresome, she fights he wins try to heal black out repeat, i'm glad to see chapter5 is getting a change of pace! what could have possibly happened to Snape? It's preposterous to think he went back to the dark lord and he inflicted the injuries, even if he could without a wand, he wouldn't get away alive. the only thing i can think of is he did it to himself... and i'm really glad she stopped his self-castration if that was what he was going to do.
...you think he would've made an unplottable safe house a bit... better stocked...
...you think he would've made an unplottable safe house a bit... better stocked...
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July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please more!! I had read this story several months ago and had forgotten about it. I accidentaly came across it again and was pleased to see a new chappie. Since I do not know how to favortie your story or figure out how to get e-mail update alerts it is hard to remember to check in once and a while. You are a great story teller, as a matter of fact as I am typing I realised this story was the first one of Harry Potter's world I had read. YOU got me hooked!! Thanks ~d
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July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I haven't been on here in a while and thought I would drop in and see if there was anyhing new to read. I am really enjoying your fic and hope to read more soon. Thanks for writing!
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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am utterly gobsmacked. I am not a fan of angst at all..but this story... It's unreal in it's complexity and just sucked me in. And self-flagellation..I did not see that coming. Oh Severus. I'm just..wow. This story is beyond intense, complex and so very, very emotional. I am in awe of it (and you) and can't even begin to anticipate where you will take it. I eagerly look forward to each chapter..I am on tenterhooks with need for more! Brilliant work, just brilliant. Please update soon and thank you for your truly inspired and creative works! :)
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July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've finally updated. This fic is intriguing. I hope you don't leave it too long before you update again.
I look forward to seeing where their relationship goes!
I look forward to seeing where their relationship goes!
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June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cinderella, I'm so thrilled that you've updated this story! The plot and your characterizations of Severus and Hermione are spot-on given their situation. One of the best "Hermione is captured" stories I've read. I'm looking forward to future updates. Thanks for sharing your talent with us! Sandra
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap... ch. 5 took my freakin' breath away when hermione saw snape like that. This chapter was so beautiful and also disturbing... but it is my favorite so far. I am so looking forward to the next chapter, i can hardly wait. Please update quickly! <3
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such an intense story. I am really glad to see an update. I have had a craving of dark stories and this is one of the most dark I have read thus far. Sure, other stories may have more violence and whatever in them, but this is haunting. I feel so bad for Hermione.
And Snape whipping himself, reminds me of those monks that whip themselves, not sure what they are called.
I am very curious about the way this story will go.
And Snape whipping himself, reminds me of those monks that whip themselves, not sure what they are called.
I am very curious about the way this story will go.
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this. You have done a wonderful job with this dark fic.
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May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I hope there is a way to follow it I have not figured out this site yet,. Thanks for a great read!! Looking forward to more!!