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for Turn On The Darkness

by CryingCinderella

schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally surprised by the first chapter - the ending of it that is. He snapped both of their wands??? OMG. Lol. I can't wait to see where this leads!!
person mmoirai
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeay! Sweet clarity!
person Amanda
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating. I know this is a dark story, but it is so good. I'm interested in seeing how things turn out. Please keep writing!
person snape1sh
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 6 and 7...oh my god. Snape's tears and Hermione's realisation. Love it how chapter 7 ended. I cannot wait to read more!
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this updated. I love the self loathing Servus you are writing. Very intriguing and can't wait to see how they continue to interact with each other.
person SilentRaven
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I loved it so much. I love how I can picture everything happening in my head so vividly. Please keep writing, this story is fantastic.
person Annabel
schedule September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I'm loving this fic, although it's very dark. I hope you'll update soon.
Kiss
person Tinymandi2
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. That was intense.
person remmisty
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hardcore. I love dark stories, i am also glad you didn't romanticize the rape in this. I like how i am unable to tell what direction this story is going, at the last chapter i had no idea how you were going to continue it and even now i can't tell. I also enjoy the suspense. I like the way you portrayed Snape also. I feel like Hermione is a little OOC just cause i think she would have realized why Snape was doing what he did she's pretty smart (didn't she see him break his own wand when they escaped?) but then again she was pretty out of it and shaken-up from just being raped and tortured so brutally so i guess it makes sense that she would be confused, taking that into account and her current state of physical and mental weakness. Great story, looking forward to the next installment
person Tinymandi2
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please continue with this story. I'm such a big fan of your fanfic!