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Very nice description of the robes. Back to Hogwarts we go.
~CC

Hi! I really like the story. Not quite Hermoine's voice - but as she has had a major life shake-up, I'm sure she'll recover :) My only request is - can you please break your paragraphs up into smaller paragraphs? It is a little hard to read on screen! I hope you keep going, I really am enjoying the story!

This is a wonderful story! I love how true you are staying to the characters. I can't wait to see what comes of Sev giving Herm potion mistress robes!

Please update soon :)

The back and forth is usually a bit much for me but you seem to have a very capable handle on it. I do like the fact that at least she doesn't realise it's him. Yet. Though I'm sure he must realise it's her. Reading the inner thoughts of the two of them with their various consciensnesses is very entertaining and I do hope to see more of it soon.
~CC

A very good start. Please more.

Loved it immensley, I can't wait for more Xx

This chapter was most interesting. I have to admit I usually don't care for the inner thoughts of the character being relayed so blatantly, but this is quite clever and well characterized. I especially enjoy the thoughts that seem to flow naturally between our omniscient story teller and what Severus or Hermione are actually thinking. In particular the bit with the bird and waking up for it. I am eager to see where this progresses to, and of course to see everyone's reactions about Severus being back at Hogwarts. Is she to apprentice him then? Or perhaps someone else and part of Minerva agreeing was to have him back on staff as well.

~CC

Fab start! I love that last line with Severus wondering how he was going to get that make up out of his silk shirt.lol Spiliting up with your Spouse is not easy even if it was mutal it still hurts. Look forward to see how this develops.

Interesting start, I look forward to reading the next chapter.