sry. this was boring. more story, plot, longer, more chapters. im not picky, but in my opinion this is not complete
Please correct your disclaimer
It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you disclaim the fandom itself by NAME, not just the characters. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specificfandom, which thus INCLUDES characters, settings, and etc.
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It was a heartbreaking peice you wrote the proved the point many H.P readers have to face. No matter what; Harry and Hermione can't be together.