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by starstruck86

schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh. i love it!
person Jilliane
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Very nice! I love me a little well written Ron/Harry every now and then!
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is just as much fun the second time around! Great job, my friend!
person JanisJ
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I loved it! This pairing was my first love in HP fanfiction... And I like how you kept it "real"-- boys arguing over assinign stuff, getting drunk for stupid reasons (and NOT crying), cussing out his partner even though he knows it's not really Ron's fault, scratching balls... (boys really do scratch their balls a lot...) but underneath it all, there is genuine love there...

AND how hot is cumming in your pants at a most unappropriate time? Ha-ha... And nice "make up" sex...

Although I'm left a feeling a little uneasy about how much Charlie knows... he certainly made a few leading comments-- and with that glint in his eye... hmmmmm...

Great job, as always! Happy New Year!! :)
person luna4917
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely the funniest thing I've ever read!!!!!!! I've been giggling and driving everyone in my house nuts because I wouldn't tell them why! Thank you for the laugh!!!!