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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about # 'heck-if-I-know..'
Oooo...what's gonna happen????
Sounds kinda kinky... ;-)
Oooo...what's gonna happen????
Sounds kinda kinky... ;-)
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, fantastic. I like to wait until your stories are finished to read them all at once, but I simply couldn't resist getting a start on this one. I really, truly am hooked on this. The story line is very much in depth, and I like the anticipation of a romantic relationship between Draco and Harry, and that it doesn't start off right away. I don't know how to fully explain that this story is so different for me than your other ones. I love it, just love it.
The different point of views you are giving really add a whole new refreshing dynamic to the story. The suspense is what keeps me in avid anticipation. Not many authors can do that, but I must say, you are an expert beyond comparison. I just can't wait until Draco and Harry start to be romantically interested in each other. I suspect their love will be epic.
I'm dying here. Please please update soon! :)
The different point of views you are giving really add a whole new refreshing dynamic to the story. The suspense is what keeps me in avid anticipation. Not many authors can do that, but I must say, you are an expert beyond comparison. I just can't wait until Draco and Harry start to be romantically interested in each other. I suspect their love will be epic.
I'm dying here. Please please update soon! :)
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February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah, its okay. My need for action was filled adequately enough from the last chapter. ^_^
This chapter was left quite suspenseful. I'm curious to read about what Clearwater.....'activated' with the words "The fox is running. Blow the horn." She seemed quite skeptical (based on her personal diary) to resort to that. It must be pretty bad since she saw no problem in using inferi. I'm also a bit nervous about hermione since I think Desang may be guessing that she was the one to impersonate her. ahhhhh! so much uncertainty, makes me anxious in a good way.
well, I'm amazed that your able to find the time to quickly update, not only this story, but the other ones you're working on. It's pretty incredible! This chapter must have been especially difficult since you wrote it in so many different perspectives while keeping everything methodical.
This chapter was left quite suspenseful. I'm curious to read about what Clearwater.....'activated' with the words "The fox is running. Blow the horn." She seemed quite skeptical (based on her personal diary) to resort to that. It must be pretty bad since she saw no problem in using inferi. I'm also a bit nervous about hermione since I think Desang may be guessing that she was the one to impersonate her. ahhhhh! so much uncertainty, makes me anxious in a good way.
well, I'm amazed that your able to find the time to quickly update, not only this story, but the other ones you're working on. It's pretty incredible! This chapter must have been especially difficult since you wrote it in so many different perspectives while keeping everything methodical.
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 11:
I love this chapter for the same reason I loved the last one like this! It's nice to get a bit more wholistic view of what's happening. I'm starting to worry about Harry even more now. Yes, it's great that he's making what might be called strides in magical theory with his control of accidental magic and the wheel concept but if he doesn't share the knowledge with more than just the five or so people at the top of the command ladder he's going to lose his following fast. He's isolating himself by going so far beyond his companions without helping them reach the same level. Draco, with his love of power and curiosity, is probably no help there but I do look forward to seeing a bit more of the "trust thing" that's going on between them.
I love this chapter for the same reason I loved the last one like this! It's nice to get a bit more wholistic view of what's happening. I'm starting to worry about Harry even more now. Yes, it's great that he's making what might be called strides in magical theory with his control of accidental magic and the wheel concept but if he doesn't share the knowledge with more than just the five or so people at the top of the command ladder he's going to lose his following fast. He's isolating himself by going so far beyond his companions without helping them reach the same level. Draco, with his love of power and curiosity, is probably no help there but I do look forward to seeing a bit more of the "trust thing" that's going on between them.
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As always, another captivating chapter! I chuckled at the part where " Draco whirled around and ran behind Weasley. At the moment, he couldn
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
Uh oh...'Like a moth to a flame..'
Uh oh...'Like a moth to a flame..'
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I love this story. Poor Draco has no idea what he's gotten himself into, does he?
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*shivers*
God, the way you described the fire... it was brilliant! It had me thinking of some ancient god come alive to take revenge. Great!
I'm really curious what kind of fire that is. It certainly doesn't sound like anything that's familiar to me^^ But it was beautiful nonetheless.
I realize that Draco is slightly addicted to power. But Harry's starting to sound slightly insane, and the way he was thinking of the world as HIS reminded me somehow of Voldemort, and isn't that a worrying thought?? Perhaps that's what you get when you play with things that aren't ment to be touched (Fortuna's Wheel or Horcruxes)...
In a nutshell: great chapter (as always^^), thank you for sharing this amazing story with us, can't wait for the next chapter!
God, the way you described the fire... it was brilliant! It had me thinking of some ancient god come alive to take revenge. Great!
I'm really curious what kind of fire that is. It certainly doesn't sound like anything that's familiar to me^^ But it was beautiful nonetheless.
I realize that Draco is slightly addicted to power. But Harry's starting to sound slightly insane, and the way he was thinking of the world as HIS reminded me somehow of Voldemort, and isn't that a worrying thought?? Perhaps that's what you get when you play with things that aren't ment to be touched (Fortuna's Wheel or Horcruxes)...
In a nutshell: great chapter (as always^^), thank you for sharing this amazing story with us, can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 10:
You made that fire sound quite delicious and I liked it! I wonder about how far into the edges of magical theory Harry is getting mostly because Ron is a rather conservative guy and, as Harry thought in this chapter, he's the commander of the revolution's army. I'm starting to worry about what would happen if something caused them to split ways. Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
You made that fire sound quite delicious and I liked it! I wonder about how far into the edges of magical theory Harry is getting mostly because Ron is a rather conservative guy and, as Harry thought in this chapter, he's the commander of the revolution's army. I'm starting to worry about what would happen if something caused them to split ways. Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #9..
Well, all I can say is...MAN!!! This is getting good! :-D
Well, all I can say is...MAN!!! This is getting good! :-D