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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm in a bit of a hurry, so please excuse my short review...
I just wondered, why Harry thinks it necessary to free ALL of Askabans prisoners? Wouldn't it be enough if they just freed those who went there after Voldemort? Because before that, there was no reason for the Ministry to favour Purebloods... Or did I get it wrong?
I'm really glad that Harry took Dracos advice to heart, but his sudden change seems fishy to me... And what was this strange sentence about his magic? I'm really worried about Harry. I hope he doesn't go insane like Voldi...
I just wondered, why Harry thinks it necessary to free ALL of Askabans prisoners? Wouldn't it be enough if they just freed those who went there after Voldemort? Because before that, there was no reason for the Ministry to favour Purebloods... Or did I get it wrong?
I'm really glad that Harry took Dracos advice to heart, but his sudden change seems fishy to me... And what was this strange sentence about his magic? I'm really worried about Harry. I hope he doesn't go insane like Voldi...
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #16...
1. Harry: "What do I always do when I do something wrong?"
Ron: "Something worse?
- Hahaha..now THAT was funny. :-]
2. You know, a 'giddy-too-powerful-for-words-almost-a-deity
who-acts-like-he'll-sprouts-rays-of-sunshine-while
talking-to-Draco' Harry Potter...is alright with me. :-)
Makes me wonder what drugs is he on and where can I get some. ;-)
3. Oh, and to give credit where credit IS due...*sigh* Ron
actually came with it in this chapter, he'll make a great
leader..and I feel like Draco, I won't say more than that. :-p
1. Harry: "What do I always do when I do something wrong?"
Ron: "Something worse?
- Hahaha..now THAT was funny. :-]
2. You know, a 'giddy-too-powerful-for-words-almost-a-deity
who-acts-like-he'll-sprouts-rays-of-sunshine-while
talking-to-Draco' Harry Potter...is alright with me. :-)
Makes me wonder what drugs is he on and where can I get some. ;-)
3. Oh, and to give credit where credit IS due...*sigh* Ron
actually came with it in this chapter, he'll make a great
leader..and I feel like Draco, I won't say more than that. :-p
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
I enjoyed the fox very much since I hold such a deep affection for those animals. I had a feeling that it was destined to die since there had to be a reason why the spell may be considered dark and why Draco had to coerce the fox so much. Its death is sad, but at least harry is saved.....for now. hm.....draco would probably think I am sympathetic fool for being sad about the fox's death, Will the ministry use that dark artifact again once they see that the first time has failed.
I liked the close interaction between Draco and Harry.
I know Draco is trying to make sure that everything he does is for his parent's sake and not because he may actually care about the well being of harry. His actions so far have been for his own personal gain, but I think he has been a huge benefit for the revolution. Draco seems to be able to stabilize Harry mentally. He is capable of explaining himself logically without getting too emotional when harry speaks about sacrifice or shielding everyone because he does not want anyone else to get hurt. I also enjoyed Draco's sarcastic comments like when he calmly explained why people may think he is crazy and then added "what a stupid comment". Its funny to read how draco isn't afraid of hurting a persons feeling and telling them what he thinks about certain things. I think that that is something Harry will need since he absorbs information more clearly when it is put bluntly.
Anyways....can't wait for the next chapter! <:D btw: that new story you came out with, The Marriage of True Minds, sounds pretty interesting. All your fics are awesome! How many plot bunnies do you have in that head of your?! sorry about digressing ^^;
I enjoyed the fox very much since I hold such a deep affection for those animals. I had a feeling that it was destined to die since there had to be a reason why the spell may be considered dark and why Draco had to coerce the fox so much. Its death is sad, but at least harry is saved.....for now. hm.....draco would probably think I am sympathetic fool for being sad about the fox's death, Will the ministry use that dark artifact again once they see that the first time has failed.
I liked the close interaction between Draco and Harry.
I know Draco is trying to make sure that everything he does is for his parent's sake and not because he may actually care about the well being of harry. His actions so far have been for his own personal gain, but I think he has been a huge benefit for the revolution. Draco seems to be able to stabilize Harry mentally. He is capable of explaining himself logically without getting too emotional when harry speaks about sacrifice or shielding everyone because he does not want anyone else to get hurt. I also enjoyed Draco's sarcastic comments like when he calmly explained why people may think he is crazy and then added "what a stupid comment". Its funny to read how draco isn't afraid of hurting a persons feeling and telling them what he thinks about certain things. I think that that is something Harry will need since he absorbs information more clearly when it is put bluntly.
Anyways....can't wait for the next chapter! <:D btw: that new story you came out with, The Marriage of True Minds, sounds pretty interesting. All your fics are awesome! How many plot bunnies do you have in that head of your?! sorry about digressing ^^;
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #15..
Good to see SOMEone has good sense and
can see into the heart of the matter.
Good to see SOMEone has good sense and
can see into the heart of the matter.
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
phew! i made it before the next update. ^__^
I have to say I really enjoyed this chapter, like always. George/Fred's conversations with himself are always quite enjoyable. Its nice to be able to read them interacting with one another even though Fred is gone, physically. Seems like george is keeping a mental part of him within himself. Even though I probably shouldn't be....I'm amused with Draco being frustrated. maybe I'm masochistic?? Its unfortunate that Draco has no one who he can really rely to and vise versa, but when a person capable of doing that does come along it cause him to stress out and get confused. I don't know I find it kind of cute when characters emotions are too jumbled for them to decipher.
I'm a bit worried about Hermione's trust in Harry. I know she has said that her faith in him wouldn't lessen unless she was given definite proof. It seems to me that she might have an inkling of doubt. You know what they say
I have to say I really enjoyed this chapter, like always. George/Fred's conversations with himself are always quite enjoyable. Its nice to be able to read them interacting with one another even though Fred is gone, physically. Seems like george is keeping a mental part of him within himself. Even though I probably shouldn't be....I'm amused with Draco being frustrated. maybe I'm masochistic?? Its unfortunate that Draco has no one who he can really rely to and vise versa, but when a person capable of doing that does come along it cause him to stress out and get confused. I don't know I find it kind of cute when characters emotions are too jumbled for them to decipher.
I'm a bit worried about Hermione's trust in Harry. I know she has said that her faith in him wouldn't lessen unless she was given definite proof. It seems to me that she might have an inkling of doubt. You know what they say
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #14..
I can honestly say I have never read a HP story that
had shadow hounds in it. Good to see different things
every once in a while.
I can honestly say I have never read a HP story that
had shadow hounds in it. Good to see different things
every once in a while.
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I really didn't think the ministry would step so low as to use Dark Artefacts...
I think the real problem Harry has is that both sides fight for something they think extraordinary important and to reach their goal, they both resort to bad measures. But while there is more than enough evidence of Harrys crimes (because he simply is more straight-forward) available for both sides, the evidence of the ministrys crimes is only on Harrys side or simply not there, as concerning the Artefact. So, when eventually one side wins, and I really hope it's Harrys revolution, the ordinary people could still think that the evidence has been tempered with, because there is no witness that doesn't belong to the revolution (at least no one who will talk...).
I hope you don't mind my rambling, but I'm trying to see some kind of sense in those dramatic happenings. And I'm having problems characterizing the people in the story... Is George mad or something? Does he have some kind of mystic connection with Fred? Is Ron still supporting Harry? Will Hermione be able to stay strong with both her partner and her best friend gone missing? Which side is Draco eventually going to choose? And so on...
But rest asured, you're doing an AMAZING job with this story and I can't stop reading until the very end, as always^^
I think the real problem Harry has is that both sides fight for something they think extraordinary important and to reach their goal, they both resort to bad measures. But while there is more than enough evidence of Harrys crimes (because he simply is more straight-forward) available for both sides, the evidence of the ministrys crimes is only on Harrys side or simply not there, as concerning the Artefact. So, when eventually one side wins, and I really hope it's Harrys revolution, the ordinary people could still think that the evidence has been tempered with, because there is no witness that doesn't belong to the revolution (at least no one who will talk...).
I hope you don't mind my rambling, but I'm trying to see some kind of sense in those dramatic happenings. And I'm having problems characterizing the people in the story... Is George mad or something? Does he have some kind of mystic connection with Fred? Is Ron still supporting Harry? Will Hermione be able to stay strong with both her partner and her best friend gone missing? Which side is Draco eventually going to choose? And so on...
But rest asured, you're doing an AMAZING job with this story and I can't stop reading until the very end, as always^^
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sorry for my lack of review last chapter. V__V i just couldn't find any time to write one. Not an excuse though, I know. This lack of time makes me appreciate you more as a writer since your able to make consistent updates to multiple stories while also responding to reviews. You Are Awesome! onto my review....
The ministry's examination of Harry is so skewed. I like the way you wrote it out since I could actually picture people thinking of the Great Harry Potter that way. Throughout the book, people's view on him has always fluctuated from thinking he is god to thinking he is the coming of another dark lord. Sadly, thats what fame does to people. Always getting misrepresented. I was shocked people would think that harry spends his extra time going into Azkaban, to torture prisoners for his sadistic pleasure. Even though harry never showed that type of personality at any other time besides the hunt for Horocrux's. I like how Hermione was able to maintain her facade even when the ministry was making shocking accusations. It was entertaining to see Malfoy making harry chase him rather then being someone who trails after him. It seemed to have frustrated harry that he wasn't able to get in contact with Draco that easily.
Hm....the latest chapter was interesting to read about too. Especially since we got to see more into what kind of relationship Draco and Harry have. I like the depiction of each character as well. We can see how Harry doesn't really worry to much about his life and how he doesn't put much value into it. While Draco values his own opinion and strength, but knows that others don't. So when harry let draco perform the strangler on him. Draco seemed astonished that someone would willing give him so much power over them while harry didn't see it to be that big of a deal. I do wonder why harry has such a relaxed personality? Even when he is in a stressful situation, he seems to take it in stride. Is it cause he isn't really concerned with anything or is it because of his power, like a song thrumming in his heart, which makes him so calm. Because when his power was sealed with 'The strangler', we did see him have a moment of trepidation.
Draco seems to be slightly disgruntled with himself. His main goal is to get his parents out of azkaban, but he finds himself yearning positive feedback from others, specifically Harry. I wonder how he'll handle his frustration in the following chapters.
Well, thanks for the updates. I'm excited for the next chapter!
The ministry's examination of Harry is so skewed. I like the way you wrote it out since I could actually picture people thinking of the Great Harry Potter that way. Throughout the book, people's view on him has always fluctuated from thinking he is god to thinking he is the coming of another dark lord. Sadly, thats what fame does to people. Always getting misrepresented. I was shocked people would think that harry spends his extra time going into Azkaban, to torture prisoners for his sadistic pleasure. Even though harry never showed that type of personality at any other time besides the hunt for Horocrux's. I like how Hermione was able to maintain her facade even when the ministry was making shocking accusations. It was entertaining to see Malfoy making harry chase him rather then being someone who trails after him. It seemed to have frustrated harry that he wasn't able to get in contact with Draco that easily.
Hm....the latest chapter was interesting to read about too. Especially since we got to see more into what kind of relationship Draco and Harry have. I like the depiction of each character as well. We can see how Harry doesn't really worry to much about his life and how he doesn't put much value into it. While Draco values his own opinion and strength, but knows that others don't. So when harry let draco perform the strangler on him. Draco seemed astonished that someone would willing give him so much power over them while harry didn't see it to be that big of a deal. I do wonder why harry has such a relaxed personality? Even when he is in a stressful situation, he seems to take it in stride. Is it cause he isn't really concerned with anything or is it because of his power, like a song thrumming in his heart, which makes him so calm. Because when his power was sealed with 'The strangler', we did see him have a moment of trepidation.
Draco seems to be slightly disgruntled with himself. His main goal is to get his parents out of azkaban, but he finds himself yearning positive feedback from others, specifically Harry. I wonder how he'll handle his frustration in the following chapters.
Well, thanks for the updates. I'm excited for the next chapter!
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just loved that power-play in trust between Draco and Harry. Oh and fantastic, detailed description of what someone void of magic felt like; so detailed I swear I almost felt it myself. Great job!
Please update soon, can't wait to read the next chap :)
Please update soon, can't wait to read the next chap :)
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
That was interesting. Though I thought the
spell would have been a bit more heavy hitting.
That was interesting. Though I thought the
spell would have been a bit more heavy hitting.