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for Intoxicate the Sun

by Lomonaaeren

person kit
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter! Lucius' behavior is quite childish....kind of embarrassing. It seems like malfoy's parents are so two-dimensial. Without their money, social standing, and influence they have nothing to give or at least they are acting that way.
My question is what will they do to prisoners who fail the interrogation? lock them up in another prison? I'm thinking that Lucius will end up failing it by admitting to feeling hostile impulses and/or the need to escape. Will Draco allow his father to be imprisoned again? It seems that draco is constantly disagreeing with his parents, but will that be enough for him to be less dedicated to staying with them. Kind of hard to tell. I'm glad to see him maintain control of the situation no matter how erratic Lucius becomes.
huh! catcher's outright confrontation with Harry was kind of....amusing. I'm sure that people were pretty put off with how nonchalant Harry acted to the confrontation. Its worrying that so many people are leaving the revolution, people could end up giving away info to the ministry. speaking of which, im curious about whats happening with Hermione.
til next chapter :)
person SParker
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #25...

1. *gives puppy dog eyes* No more dragons? :-(

2. Poor...poor Catchers, such a lovesick nut. Is he based on
someone YOU know?

Anyway, not a darn thing resolved...looks like it's going to be
stalemates all around. I'm tempted to sit back, not say anything
and see just how you resolve this one, because you have me guessing
at this point.
person sp777
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About #24... Oookay. Just how clueless does Harry insist on being? I mean, does he NOT want to resolve the issue of people thinking he doesn't want the change in the way things are done in the Ministry? Me, personally...I would have been like 'ok, what are YOUR major concerns?' 'What do you want to see happen?' Then I would have spoke to Ron about it....and what's wrong with kissing Harry?
person kit
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! their first kiss!! *calms down*
hm....like draco said, harry's reason for being attracted to him is quite strange....i can't understand it, but a lot of people's attraction to one another is sometimes illogical. I'm sure Lucius won't like to hear that their relationship has further developed.
I enjoyed reading about Catchers being threatened to undergo pain if he spills any information to the ministry. He was getting kind of annoying. Harry's domineering side is quite intimidating, reminds people why they shouldn't cross him. Even though Catcher's got the 'message', thats probably not the last we'll see of him huh? jealousy can make people do stupid things.
Cant wait til the next chapter!
person SParker
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

1. Well now, it seems Draco has balls after all. :-)
I was wondering what happened to 'the man' and if the
little boy I was seeing would keep permitting Lucius
to disrespect him.

2. *sigh* I'm going to miss those dragons. :-(

3. I agree with Fred, something is up with Harry
and I feel when everything is said & done, he will
move on to a place where no one can follow, not
even Draco.

Now, that would be a different ending for a H/D
story...

4. Dross & Slag??? O_o

person kit
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hm....very interesting. I know that draco said he would do anything to get his parents out of azkaban and somewhere safe, but now that that has been almost accomplished, will draco let his parents view points affect his involvement with the rebellion. Lucius definitely doesn't seem happy to see draco allying himself with harry and acting civilized with a weasley. I think, It'll be hard for father and son to agree on this since lucius is still stuck seven years in the past while draco has become a grown man, forming his own opinions, and accustomed to how the world has changed since Hogwartz. Maybe Narcissa will help since she didn't seem to opposed to what draco has become a part of?
Cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! :]
person SParker
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #22..

You know what, after all the times I've seen how you
relate Draco to his parents, I think this is the FIRST
time I've seen the...tenderness[?]..that flowed from
Draco TO his parents.

Granted there has always been scenes that shows the
connection between Mother [Narcissa] & child [Draco],
mostly affection. But, there was another facet of that
relationship that came across and I'm sure you didn't
realize you'd done it...showing a tender side between
parent & child.

Get what I mean?

Anyway, enjoying the interaction between Harry & the dragons
as always. :-)
person kit
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its touching to see how much Draco cares for his parent, but also kind of frightening that he is willing to do anything, even if it means to kill everyone in the rebellion, to protect and save them. Ron and Draco seem to have developed a grudging connection to one another. Don't see them becoming friends.....but at least there not at each others throats which is good since harry and draco are getting closer to one another. cant wait for the next chapter! :]
person SParker
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #21...

Aww...that was such a bittersweet reunion. :-(
Kinda have misgivings about rescuing Lucius,
but hey...they can deal with that later on.

You know, the more I read this, the more I
feel that Harry is destined for greater things
that have nothing to do with the Wizard World,
much less this plane of existence.

But that would be putting a wrench in your plans
for this story, would it? :-)

person SParker
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #20...

You know, I feel like Catchers...you want to do WHAT!!!
With the help of WHAT!!!!! O_o

Because, you have to admit Harry went into this plan, with no....plan.

I think it goes back to those Hogwarts days, when he's used to flying
by the seat of his pants, with only his friends to understand the craziness.

I think that needs to be explained by Harry, he's used to doing things
under pressure AND by the seat of his pants. BUUUT, on the other hand, Harry
needs to realize he IS grown and responsible for a lot of adults who are
used to structure.

ANYway, I still think the 'how' of the rescue plan is cool, crazy but cool. :)