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for Intoxicate the Sun

by Lomonaaeren

person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading this. I like it a lot. But I hate Harry's "followers" lol. Good stuff. I think I prefer the fics where Harry is the one to kinda jump start their relationships.
person SP777
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #32...

I find myself wondering when will Draco let himself
go & WHEN will Harry put Pedlar the Pill in her place?
Because she IS annoying.
person Kendra1117
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First I want to say that I have definitely NOT lost interest and love every second of this. :-).
Second, I apologize for not reviewing but I have to make time to read, let alone spend time writing.
That said, I ADORE your stories and when I see your name, it becomes an automatic bookmark on my iPhone home screen. Harry/Draco is the only pair I read and you do major justice for them as a couple. It is so hard to find others who like M/M stories-let alone H/D. I feel at home reading your stories.
With this story specifically, I love your Draco. I can totally see him that way-torn between what he thinks he should do because of family obligation and personal desire. Pedlar is so annoying but needed for this story to help Harry prove he can do what's needed for the revolution. Too often there are stories (and good ones at that-I see their point as well) where Harry is more submissive and Draco is the domineering personality. I come to find in my head that Harry has overcome so much after DH that he won't be that submissive anymore. I see them more as equals and I can see them respecting each other more of they are equals. I tend to find that them in your stories. Thanks for being AMAZINGand for letting me get my H/D fix on a regularly updated frequency.
person SP777
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #31...

NOW, we're getting to the heart of things, finally [...and
the fact you must be watching certain movies that deal
with lightning too many times]! :-)

I don't know if you made your decision of how Harry is
going to approach this, but I'm all for him making the
decision of leaving. Because of the simple fact, I had a
feeling that was the direction you were going.

I've become so used to you writing about him having wild
magic that to put him in such a situation seems like a
natural next step in a story like this.

I don't know what else to say about it. Harry being a
powerful wizard transcending to different plane of
existence, almost like Merlin....almost I said. Anyway,
it's sort of...poetic in a way?

By the way, am I the only person reading this...or the
only one reviewing right now??? O_o
person SParker
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww...damn you caught that? :-p
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about #30...

1. "Not that I'm in a position to criticize you, not when I love a woman who's been hit with
the Imperius Curse or something worse and is probably on the verge of betraying us as we speak."


Okay, did I miss something? When did he figure that one out? Was it that letter?
person SParker
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #29...

You know, when Harry pulls these amazing lil' feats of magic, I gotta admit
it gives me a thrill. :-)

Say, what does your ideal Harry look like for this fic, because for me he's
at least 5''11, wearing dark green robes, wavy past the shoulder-length hair,
eyes are corrected, chiseled jaw, lean & muscular AND piercing, medium-dark
green eyes. *whoa* O_o

Oh, loved the comparison you did on how Draco was speaking..'his words flowed
like diarrhea'. You know...you have to be careful saying stuff like that around
me, because I'll latch onto that 'shit' & 'run' with it. :-D

The situation with Hermione is starting to become constipating, when will she break
out of it & do some real damage to Clearwater or will Harry have to intervene on
this one?
person SParker
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #28...

Heat? HEAT?!? Come to Texas & I'll show you
some damn heat! Hah!

But, seriously, I'm glad they FINALLY MADE THAT
LEAP. Well, that is Draco did, hope there's no regrets
before they get to the REAL stuff that sparks
fireworks. :-]

..and it's good to know Harry has SOME control over
himself, so to speak. *ahem*

A burning room would kill the mood.
person SParker
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #27...

Okay, I HAVE to say this, but...WHY THE HELL DID THESE
PEOPLE JOIN THE DAMN REVOLUTION!!!!

I've never seen so much bitching in my life, it's like
they have constant PMS. I mean honestly, I am NOW getting
the impression they only joined because it was Harry Potter
'leading' tha' good fight. :-/

...and they were hoping he would be oh-so victorius in ONLY
one week, with him wearing a freakin' cape on his shoulders
& farting the sun out of his ass. *sigh*

..and Ms. Thang, why didn't you let Harry duel Pedlar the Pill?
I would have LOVED to have seen her embarrassment.

Other than that, you're doing a good job on this story. :-)
person SParker
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #26...

All I can say is I have my suspicions, but
I think I know the 'person who is writing to
the Minister, I'm sure Hermione is still struggling
with whatever was done to her [I had forgotten about
her] AND just as I thought, Harry is destined for
greater things. It's just a question of WHAT it is
and WHEN it will happen.
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Catchers. He had no idea what he was getting himself into. Sweet kiss with Draco. And I love how he's dealing with his father and that Lucius isn't just abjectly grateful.