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for Intoxicate the Sun

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #36...

This was not what I expected, I thought there would
be a more verbal confrontation, but it was more of
a confrontation of 'trying to understand where the
other is coming from...or where they stand.'

Hopefully Draco takes the offer of help.

It was a good chapter.
person SP777
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #35...

the Destroyer of Hearts...hmm, that sounds like
a one-shot, what do you think?

It's good to see that Draco's feelings are finally/somewhat
true, now to convince the redheads.

I think in order for this revolution to survive & go in
the direction it needs, Harry needs to fade in the background,
give his thoughts & opinions behind the scenes and have Ron be
in the forefront, like it was in the beginning.

I think when the time calls for it, Ron will find the words
that will inspire & ignite the passion in people that Harry
is capable of. He just needs to put all the unnecessary thoughts ...and
uncomfortable feelings [Harry & Draco]..out of his head and
get back to focusing on what was important

I've been meaning to ask you, have you ever used your real
name in a story on the sly?
person kit
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Everyone is going through such a frustrating situation. I'm not sure how Draco is going to handle his parents when imprisonment is out of the question and so is freeing them.
Looks like Ron is going to have to step it up and become the new leader. seems reasonable since people don't trust Harry. I'm curious to see how the conversation between draco and the twins will go. should be interesting!
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this fic more and more. God I want Pedlar to just go. She's so annoying lol.

Have you ever written a fic where Draco had straight up wild magic like you normally do for Harry? I noticed you write a lot of creature Draco stuff, but not too many where it's Draco's natural strength.
person SP777
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #34...

1. A better theme song that has to do with...???...ooohhh...okay!
*points at author* Gotcha! I think I'll look one up just for the
hell of it. :-)

2. I don't know, man, but this revolution looks like it's about to
crumble around Harry's ears, though he wasn't trying to start
one in the first place, he REALLY should remind folks of that.

Uhh...DO you have a solution to this drama that keeps coming up,
because you got me on the edge here, mah dear.

Personally, the idea of letting Ron lead it was a good one, he IS
still a good strategist.
person SP777
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #33...

Okay, let's face it Pedlar the Pill needs a theme
song. Anything comes to mind? I thought of
"Jagged Little Pill", but that's too easy..and
not entirely accurate.

By the way, when will Harry & Clearwater face off?
Will there be talk/negotiations?
person SP777
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #33...

Okay, Pedlar the Pill needs a theme song. I thought
about "Jagged Little Pill", but that was too easy.
Any suggestions?

By the way, when will Harry & Clearwater face off?
Will there be talks/negotiations?

..and will Hermione get her revenge?
person warya
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
o.m.g o.o =D =D =D =D

I'm so happy for Harry! Thank you for updating, this has been one of the best fanfics I've ever read, I don't even mind waiting for updates anymore lol.
person KcRae
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm already on your mailing list but just now checked out this story. Fantastic! I'm intrigued although I abhor Pedler. Sigh. Also, I'm very concerned about George's sanity. Well, see you next chapter.
person kit
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
huh! so now its all out in the open. Everyone knows Draco and Harry are sleeping together.
Pedlar is so annoying. yeah, she has a slight point about Harry having favoritism when it comes to Malfoy but she is bound to be right about something when she criticizes Harry about everything.
Will Harry really leave just because he is being told to?? If he does, which seems likely, will others follow him (The Malfoy's and Weasley's)? Cant wait for the next chapter!