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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I missed the last update but that was only my luck this time, 'couse now I had a double update!
Damn two chapters and it's still not 'over' the machine part. You keep us hangin again.
Did I miss something or is it still unknown who the traitor is?
I missed the last update but that was only my luck this time, 'couse now I had a double update!
Damn two chapters and it's still not 'over' the machine part. You keep us hangin again.
Did I miss something or is it still unknown who the traitor is?
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*face palms* now i get it! lol can't wait to see how he deals with the next step.
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #46...
Whu??!!?? O_o
..and THAT'S where you stop???
Whu??!!?? O_o
..and THAT'S where you stop???
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well hopefully the next chappie shows what that was all meant to achieve cause i'm a little lost then again i've been doing algebra and trig homework so my brain is mush.
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September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #45...
Yeah, I can see right now you're going to throw a
twist in, to throw folks off the track, but I see
either, Draco [unintentionally], Hermione [in an
effort to do right...as usual] OR Ron [because he
feels his friend is to far gone] becoming a 'traitor
with good intentions.
...and those are just theories, in the meantime, I'll
sit back & watch to see what you'll do and I won't
mention this anymore until the right time.
By the way, how long will this story be?
Yeah, I can see right now you're going to throw a
twist in, to throw folks off the track, but I see
either, Draco [unintentionally], Hermione [in an
effort to do right...as usual] OR Ron [because he
feels his friend is to far gone] becoming a 'traitor
with good intentions.
...and those are just theories, in the meantime, I'll
sit back & watch to see what you'll do and I won't
mention this anymore until the right time.
By the way, how long will this story be?
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September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I just started reading this story yesterday and it sure has me intrigued. It's really different from what I expected from the summary. Can't wait to find out how things will wrap up.
My gues for the traitor would be Harry himself or Fred/George acting because it's the right thing in their head.
cheers
I just started reading this story yesterday and it sure has me intrigued. It's really different from what I expected from the summary. Can't wait to find out how things will wrap up.
My gues for the traitor would be Harry himself or Fred/George acting because it's the right thing in their head.
cheers
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do you know that out of all your stories both old and new i think that this one may be my absolute favorite. While I will always love (and have a special place in my heart for) "I Give You A Wondrous Mirror" since that story introduced me to you and your work (which I have been following almost religiously ever since) this one, to me is the best you've written by far yet. Now I'm sure that you can (and probably will) come up with something greater (even if it is not in the same way as this story is great) but for now this will mostly definitely do as my favorite of your (and all H/D) stories.
On this chapter: I am so glad Hermione is back with them. It felt a little odd her not being there. I mean I understood why she couldn't be but it still felt odd. Maybe she can help level the situation more or give a different perspective on things that we haven't noticed yet. I also wonder what Harry thought the traitor part of the prophecy meant. It will be very interesting to see how this all turns out. Plus I'm dying to know what that machine does and what Harry's plan is. So I can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne ^__^
On this chapter: I am so glad Hermione is back with them. It felt a little odd her not being there. I mean I understood why she couldn't be but it still felt odd. Maybe she can help level the situation more or give a different perspective on things that we haven't noticed yet. I also wonder what Harry thought the traitor part of the prophecy meant. It will be very interesting to see how this all turns out. Plus I'm dying to know what that machine does and what Harry's plan is. So I can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne ^__^
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #44..
1. I doubt Desang know that much about Hermione.
Nooo...what I meant was, if Desang thinks Hermione is easy
to 'get rid of', she has another thing coming. Because of
the fact, Hermione was a member of the DA, her fighting
skills is up to par & she's no pushover, even if she has to go
against an Auror.
I wasn't saying Desang knew about Hermione's past concerning the DA.
2. You know, I've been thinking about the prophecy myself and
personally, I believe the 'traitor' will be unaware of the consequences
their actions will cause Harry. Out of good intentions, perhaps?
..and I think I know who it'll be.
1. I doubt Desang know that much about Hermione.
Nooo...what I meant was, if Desang thinks Hermione is easy
to 'get rid of', she has another thing coming. Because of
the fact, Hermione was a member of the DA, her fighting
skills is up to par & she's no pushover, even if she has to go
against an Auror.
I wasn't saying Desang knew about Hermione's past concerning the DA.
2. You know, I've been thinking about the prophecy myself and
personally, I believe the 'traitor' will be unaware of the consequences
their actions will cause Harry. Out of good intentions, perhaps?
..and I think I know who it'll be.
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again, still reading, still enjoying. :)
I can't really make up my mind about whether or not Harry is actually mad. I want to say no because I don't want him to lol but I'll see where it goes (and honestly, you have to kind of crack under that kind of pressure). I liked how he made Ron see the stag so that he gets a better understanding of the situation and also how Draco questions his own motifs. Am still a bit confused by the device with the loops but I trust you to clear it up soon :)
I can't really make up my mind about whether or not Harry is actually mad. I want to say no because I don't want him to lol but I'll see where it goes (and honestly, you have to kind of crack under that kind of pressure). I liked how he made Ron see the stag so that he gets a better understanding of the situation and also how Draco questions his own motifs. Am still a bit confused by the device with the loops but I trust you to clear it up soon :)
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #43...
1. If I tell you that Harry is truly starting to be
unnerving to me in this story, that means you're doing
a damn good job, with characterization.
2. Hermione better watch her back, because Desang's got
a pound of flesh she wants to take out on her. I think
Desang needs to realize that she was once part of
Dumbledore's Army!
1. If I tell you that Harry is truly starting to be
unnerving to me in this story, that means you're doing
a damn good job, with characterization.
2. Hermione better watch her back, because Desang's got
a pound of flesh she wants to take out on her. I think
Desang needs to realize that she was once part of
Dumbledore's Army!