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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have read many of your stories. they make me very sad most of the time, very lonely. But I love them, they are quite exellent, and your Characterization, especially Draco is pretty much perfect. I love the way you right him. However I find some of your storys frustrating, and that perhaps they drag slightly, though I do understand you need proper character development, sometimes its best to jump to the meat of the matter and quit the long dances, much as I enjoy them. I said you are amazing, and every time I read your stories a feel like a loser for trying to write ;)
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am kinda confused on why they didn't first see if they could just walk in, they weren't holding any threat against hogwarts... or ask Minerva if hey could come peacefully... or whatever. anyways, looking forwards to more updates!
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Chapter 5,
A written version of parseltongue? I'm not really sure how that would have translated unless a snake drawing patterns on the page with its tail would make up a written language. As much as I appreciated and laughed at Draco saying he'd become a Gryffindor at last I don't really think there's anything more Slytherin than using the truth to tell lies. Regardless, I enjoyed it immensely.
A written version of parseltongue? I'm not really sure how that would have translated unless a snake drawing patterns on the page with its tail would make up a written language. As much as I appreciated and laughed at Draco saying he'd become a Gryffindor at last I don't really think there's anything more Slytherin than using the truth to tell lies. Regardless, I enjoyed it immensely.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another fantastic chapter! I'm interested to see how everything will play out with there being an unknown number of spies and characters whose intentions are well hidden. I loved seeing Ron taking charge and not letting his emotions get in the way of their mission, especially when they faced McGonagall. I'm excited to see how Draco's presence will effect the rebellion. Thanks again for taking the time to write this story! ^w^
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i only hope that potter changes the world again and that draco can have potter and his parents
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #4...
You know, I'm surprised Draco didn't verbally
curse out that woman for the hell of it. That
was a deceitful low blow.
..oh, is Harry going to start trying to harness
his power?
AND
Agent H.G.W is on the case! Good Lord, she's been reading
too many police drama novels.
You know, I'm surprised Draco didn't verbally
curse out that woman for the hell of it. That
was a deceitful low blow.
..oh, is Harry going to start trying to harness
his power?
AND
Agent H.G.W is on the case! Good Lord, she's been reading
too many police drama novels.
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
1. Ooo...they have Ministry Pegasi??? Go figure! O_o
2. Man, midst all the chaos you can ALWAYS depend on Hermione
to go left field on some 'important' fact. Tho' I think that
was actual fact in reality.
3. You know it HAS been a while since you wrote a 'revolution'
story! Damn, I almost feel like doing a African war chant! :-D
Can't wait to see how Draco shows up in this.
1. Ooo...they have Ministry Pegasi??? Go figure! O_o
2. Man, midst all the chaos you can ALWAYS depend on Hermione
to go left field on some 'important' fact. Tho' I think that
was actual fact in reality.
3. You know it HAS been a while since you wrote a 'revolution'
story! Damn, I almost feel like doing a African war chant! :-D
Can't wait to see how Draco shows up in this.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the style you used here with the letters and articles. Really, really well done.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! So far, they seem to progress really fast and without any problems, although I think that the problems are about to start as soon as Draco joins their ranks... Can't say I'm particularly fond of him right now, though, because I totally understand Harry and his frustration. This ministry reign seems real rubbish to me, about time someone stops them!!! And creating Inferi?! You can't be serious, they seem as bad as Voldi ever did!!
And by the way, I'm really curious about wheather Harry will forgive Draco for his spying or not, or if Draco comes to his senses and switches sides for good, even becomes a double agent the way Snape did... The irony wouldn't be lost on me^^
And by the way, I'm really curious about wheather Harry will forgive Draco for his spying or not, or if Draco comes to his senses and switches sides for good, even becomes a double agent the way Snape did... The irony wouldn't be lost on me^^
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited to see what 'methods' the head auror will use to catch harry. will they have a traitor amongst their rebellion or will it be something more sinister. Anyways....this new story of your sounds fantastic! I cant wait until the next update. ^w^
I'm curious to see how draco will fit into the rebellion.
You truly are a great author. Im going to become addicted to this fanfic, like i was with 2 of my favorite stories written by you 'veela struck' and 'changing of the guard'
I'm curious to see how draco will fit into the rebellion.
You truly are a great author. Im going to become addicted to this fanfic, like i was with 2 of my favorite stories written by you 'veela struck' and 'changing of the guard'