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Snape is teasing him. But not in the way Harry thinks. If I remember the spell right, it's supposed to enslave whoever weaker. So who's weaker in this pairing? Great update!

(Chapters 1 - 4)

Oh my goodness! So much to love, love ,LOVE in this story!!! I really like your teenaged Severus, snark and sneer intact, and now a Gryffindor! LOL! Honestly, I don't think he's out of character at all. I love the banter with Harry too, that's just perfect. I also love the imagination you've put into this, with the Morgaine's Thread spell, the Chronos Curse, and the bookworms. Fabulous stuff and I'm dying to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter!

YES!!! Go Severus! I hope they are slaves to each other since I do perceive that they are equals as they complement each other. Hot because Severus takes whatever he wants whenever he wants it. Love that. The sheepish reaction of Harry is uber sweet too. Really can't wait for another update. I want 'em serious to the point that they can't be even a hair poking being their intertwined bond. Let them be the greatest couple ever created in the history of young couples. EN wins for another genre!!!

Hhahah... Love this to its very core and kind of happy to have it updated in a week. Hopefully RL won't disrupt the scheduling. Thanks for another beautiful update. I'm weird so I love most of everything people throw at me but you just hit all the right buttons.

Lorraine

I really want to read more of this! It's fabulous so far! The idea is just fantastic. Your characterizations are awesome. Please please continue!

Hey... where's the next button for chapter 3. This isn't supposed to be left for so long. More please!

Oh me likey! The summary caught my eye, then I saw who wrote it and thought, "goody goody goody". Ain't nothing like finding a new story from a writer with known/proven skills. I'm very intrigued and what a great start. Chapter 2 leaves us wondering what Severus' plans are. I'm sure he can 'guilt' Dumbledore into almost anything that isn't illegal (and maybe a few that skirt legality!) in payment for his years of loyal service. I will have to wait to see how this little gem of a story develops and I will try to be patient. Key word; try.

Love it! More please!! :)

Please tell me you'll be updating this fic! I love out and keep checking back but nada. :( place email me when you do!

more please!! i want to know what happens!

This is an excellent story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Thanks