rate_review Reviews

looking forwards to continuing... but how is Harry...er... Harleen going to react when the magic signature on Mr.Wayne is abruptly different? What if David Forrester carries the belt with him for some reason WITH the coin?

Oh, I've never seen a Batman/HP crossover! But you write really well and I'm intrigued already.
I can't wait to read more!

Thank you for the great - and long - chapter! I was very glad that Harry understood that Bruce and David were the same person quickly too. I don't really like it when people make him more dense than he truly is.
Now that they both know more than they let on, I wonder who is going to reveal himself or the other first... And if Bruce Wayne will still be attracted to Harry now that he knows he's a man. And if he will make a move on Harry as Bruce.
Also, thanks for including things from the wizarding world at Harry's place and for Bruce noticing. Will the wizard he met for information play a bigger role in the story? Since he seemed really interested in finding a pregnant wizard;..
And couldn't Harry meet wizards (even unwillingly) in Gotham, since the old magic might attract others? I would think it's possible to find wizards in most big cities around the world, even if only a few... But anyway, I'm glad Harry is still friends with David, despite the lies. With the homesickness, Harry needs some company if he doesn't want to go crazy. Right?
I can't wait to see how Tom will be this time around, and how Harry will raise him (with a magical education? I can't see Harry not allowing it for his son). But first comes the game of hide and seek between Harry and Bruce, I suppose? :)

omg!!
love love love love love love this story!!
can't wait to see what happens next

Hey really interesting story so far. Even if Im normally not a fan of male pragnancy I have to admit that your story is well written an nicely done so far. Im really interested how little Tom turns out and when Harry discover who barman really is.
Thank you for your hard work. Greetings

Love it! Can't wait for more :)

i think it's interesing that that burce think of his other masks as people. you have to wonder whos the real bruce though. but i love how well he took harry's two secrets, altough i think it's unfair that harry only knows one of his. but i can't wait to read more. i wonder will bruce be there when tom is born?

Right on! I love how your story is unfolding. I find you little old wizard intriguing, will we be seeing more of him later on? And this spin you have were they are both suspicious of each other, but are still trying to act as if nothing is different.
I must admit that this story has got me hooked. It is totally new and fresh, and i can't wait to see what will happen next.

This is an amazing plot. I cant wait to see where you take this story next!

I'm really getting caught up in this one - good work! Looking forward to more/