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for Secunda Fortuna

by angelwarrior1

schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story. Hope you post more soon.
person heartstar
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes it was worth it. i hope to see more soon please...
person Althydia
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again! Now that one secret is revealed, I wonder when and how Harry will learn that Bruce knows other things about him... Also, Bruce's feelings for Harry seem to become more ambiguous. What about Harry's for Bruce? And I liked the part about Harry 'communicating' with Gotham. Will it have an importance for the rest of the story?
person Dru
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. this is the first HP/batman x-over i've ever read and i love it. Harry and Bruce are both developing wonderfully and I cant wait to see where they go from here and who was the mysterious wizard that batman went to go see?
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this so much! Love your Bruce. You're really pulling that character off well. He's just the right combination of nice guy and crafty, paranoid freak. Sure he may be smart and mostly benevolent but we all know the guy's got issues. I had a little chuckle about the magic thing. Who else would have immediately drawn that conclusion, and then actually accepted it so easily?

I also want to commend you on your pacing. Not too rushed or so slow that it gets boring. Always building a little suspense, but not enough to cause frustration. I'm positively riveted!
person Orkchild
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I surprise myself with how much I enjoy this story. When it was first suggested to me I did not think I would like it but the more of it I read the more I'm drawn into the story. a definite testimony to the richness of your writing.
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until Har and Bruce uncover each others secrets... or even better, trust each other with their secrets. after all, Har is going to need someone in the know when he's ready to drop. I'mm a bit worried at the news paper report. If Bruce was thinking, he woulda gone as his street alter ego.
person cocoke5
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think that the story is good and the plot is great and i love way that you have harry is a girl and haveing a baby ,. and haveing batman fall in love with harry. i love the story. and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen next.
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how things are developing between Harry and Bruce, I wonder how things will eventually end up? I am looking forward to seeing how the both learn the rest of the others secrets. How will Harry handle Batman and such. Great story and I look forward to the next chapter being up soon. Keep up the good work.
person oOMissGOo
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh so funny, as I read the summary I was laughing my belly out...
the pairing, I thougt, is a little bit like our Kanzlerin Angelika Merkel in a hot passionate relationship with the Terminator
but the world is open and so am I *hihi* Batman
I must say that I rather like your stil and the logik around the illogicality, you now magic, male pregnancy and last but not least superheros

Liebe Gr