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An update... AN UPDATE!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YoU THANK YOU!!!! IVE BEEN DYING FOR THIS UPDATE TO HAPPEN!!!

considering the circumstances of his birth lil tom looks surprisingly normal. I wonder how many of his former traits he'll take on and whether a good up bringing will make a difference. sighs. har never could do anything normally, even giving birth. :P
look forward to seeing what happens next.

This is very interesting so far. Didn't know what to think when I read the summery, but I'm glad I gave it a go. You're doing a wonderful job so far, and I hope you have many good days and less bad days. Take care!

Leania

I'm so happy you came back! I'd given your story up for dead...love the idea and love the pairing. Don't love the wait for the next chapter. Don't keep me waiting so long next time, yeah? x.

Yay! Tom is born! That'll be a relief for Harry. Now he can get his magic working for him again and he won't be so slow and helpless. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. It was a tense chapter, I must say.

With the mention of Vicky Vale I started to wonder which version of the Joker you were going to portray. Nice choice, and very well done. He was good and scary. ^^

You're doing so well, I don't know that you need the beta. Only one thing popped out at me. This line; "..leaving a relieved Harry in his midst." I think the word you were searching for was 'wake'. Once he left, then Harry was no longer in his midst. But that's hardly note-worthy, and otherwise the chapter was top notch.

Thanks so much for the update. I love this story! Still the best crossover ever!

Are you gonna keep Tom's Middle name as Malvolio? or however you spell it......

Alright I have to admit. When I first saw the summary for this story I thought "no way this will be any good" Fortunately my curiosity won and I clicked on it anyways. I was pleasantly surprised by what I found in this story. Its actually well written and seems to be well paced. The dialogue is believable and flows well. I am intrigued by Harry's and Bruce's relationship and how you are going to reveal to them the others secrets. The only thing I can honestly say that I could find a problem with is naming the baby Tom. Explaining the baby could be easy, but naming the baby that name could only cause problems with the entire wizarding world if he decides to go back. none of his friends would understand. No one would understand actually. But still I am thrilled with this story so far and I cant wait to see what comes next. I'm also interested in how you are going to do the birth scene. I am eagerly waiting an update! Please keep up the great work!

Wonderful as always and can't wait for more! Hope you feel better soon! :D

You know! An update would be very appreciate! Could you, please, give us one?

I will start by saying that I love this story and can't wait to read more. Hope you get better soon and concur the dreaded writters block. I can not wait to read how Harry tells Bruce every thing. I am looking fowerd to more of your lovely writing.