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I'm so glad to see this story continue! I really like your unique way of having an mpreg, it adds the tension of not being in a relationship and having tom riddle as a son. Please keep going, it sounds soo interesting!!

I can't wait until you add Bruce into the mix...=]

Love the story...plz continue.. cant wait to read more...
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Hey,

So, I would be willing to beta your story for Harry Potter continuity. I love what I've read so far and want to help you continue.
I've been reading HP fanfiction for 8 years, but I've never been a beta.

Just let me know!

-Steph

Here is some suggestions 1.as to how often once a week usually keeps the mob with torches and pitchforks from your door. More often is always nice.
2. I find writing an outline helps me keep my story from wandering off and me from forgetting pieces of important information. It can be as little as just chapter headings and and where you want the story to be at the of the chapter and any important facts you need to include. To very detailed as to exactly which characters you want in each chapter and exactly what situation they will be dealing with. That way when you flesh it out you have a bit of a map or a GPS telling exactly where to go. 3. A couple of suggestions for writers block. If it is due to the situation the characters are in and you can't figure out what they should do try putting yourself in their place or a favorite character from another story in the situation and see how they would deal with it. Or if it is a real life situation blocking your muse, try looking at it from your favorite character's point of view and it might give you a better perspective. 4. Lastly look for a good beta as they can serve as an editor and spring board for your writing.

Oh, I've never seen a Batman/HP crossover! But you write really well and I'm intrigued already...I'll be checking back daily for you. x

So if Voldemort is tethered to Harry, does that mean the baby is the last bit of Voldemort's soul? And will Harry leave for Gotham knowing he's going to be pregnant or does that happen later? And what about the villains? Can't wait to read more!

I very intregued, I can't wait to read more!

Kool :D I like where this is going, and I like how you got Harry pregant, though when you explain it, and how the baby got to be there in the first place, I'll be much happier ^^ I also wanna see how Bruce will react when confronted with a pregant man. All I ask is that you don't make Harry crazy with hormones and stuff, beacuse in real life, most people are not. (And it really makes the story feel anoying and crackish) A little is fine, but please don't over-do it! And sorry I can't be your Beta! I would really love to, but I don't know much about Batman, and though I love Harry Potter, I don't know all the in and out of it ^^ (Plus, my spelling sucks, lol XD)

I can't wait for more!

Thanks,
~Kera