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MORE PLEASE! I like the way you initiated the pregnancy. Hope to see an update soon!

really like the story and I hope you update it soon!

... (Hearts) I'm in love. Like seriously! Please update soon? I'm begging you :D

Whoop! I'm so glad you updated! And I really like the fact that you're giving Tom another chance ^^ I always wondered what he would be like if, like you said, he grew up in a lovig family. Mabye you could write a sequel about Tom growing up and them as a family? I would really love that ^^ But that's for another moment, ne? And you can bounce you're Ideas off of me if you want :3 I just don't think I can be a Proper Beta, at least for this story, beacuse I don't really know much about Batman :/ If you want some on to chat with, though, I'd love to do that ^^ My e-mail is keraizaki@yahoo.com :3

Also, if you wanna get more Reviews though, you should reply to them. ^^ And if you don't want to take up space on your Chapter Pages, then got to the sites forum and mae and account. You can't post the replys there, and then just put a link at the top of each chapter ;D That what this person did for this story (http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600025626&chapter=27) So if you have any questions just ask her :3

Write more soon please!
Thanks,
~Kera

This is an interesting crossover. I don't think a read a Mpreg quite like this one before. I'm looking forward to reading more.

This story has real potential. Hope you'll continue. I can offer some partial beta services (RL is a bitch at the moment, so I hesitate to step up for the whole job). Shoot me an email at betafiles at verizon dot net and let's chat.

PS - Suggest you have a look at "Blessings from Malice" and "Guardian Angel" by Sarhea over at the Hermione Big Bang archive ( http://www.hermione.magical-worlds.us/ ). While they're Hermione/Bruce stories, they're remarkably well written and really capture the blend of worlds needed for a good crossover.

Interesting route so far, I enjoyed seeing Harry as Harleen. Is he going to stay as HYarleen for the duration of the pregnancy or wait until he's so far along he can't hide it? I'm really looking forward to more!

If you still need a beta my email is Donna beth 89 @ hotmail . com (minus the spaces of course) and I'd be happy to help.

i like this story. the idea of harry rasing the once dark lord is very interesting. i wish i could help you with the bata thing but i never watched the moives just the show. but i hope it works out cuz i think it's a good story sofar.

Interesting start