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for Secunda Fortuna

by angelwarrior1

schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i wasn't sure about this but it's really cool. am glad i read it!
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, hope there will be more coming soon.
person morri
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you..a wonderful story and I hope to read more soon.

I smiled because of the image batman would have made, picking up lost grocery
person Negami
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oii, u can't just leave us hanging like that!!! I want more!!! can't wait to see where u are going with this story, but I
already like the beginning!!! so please keep up the good work and update as soon as possible!!
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad harry didn't get rape. even with the warning i still feared for him in the heat of the moment. i can't wait to read more.
person Bitterwind
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not an expert in Latin, but I'm pretty sure the correct word order for the title would be 'Casus secundus'.
Also, 'casus' translates more like 'a case' or 'an incident'. Second chance would be 'Opportunitas secundus'.
Somebody please correct me if I'm wrong.

Nitpicking aside I really liked your story, especially the beginning. It's different.
person Orkchild
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Harry taking himself off instead of depending on others really shows his trust issues from his "childhood". Keep up the good work
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww they finally get to meet. keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next :)
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh I like it so far! truly looking forward to the updates :)