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for That which we make for ourselves

by magentasouth

person tinkita
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!!! I love it. I feel for Harry and his problems and hope that he will be sure of Toms feelings in the future. Please update as soon as possible. I can't wait to read the new chapters!

bye

tinkita
person Nasyki
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I love this story. I'm sooooo glad that you updated. I love how you make Diary!Tom different from Tom. The personalities are very well developed. I'm glad to see Harry finally getting a little less needy. I like it far more when he is strong enough to do things on his own. I was VERY pleased at the Dairy!TomHarry action. Yummy, I've been waiting since he picked up the book for that. Hopefully some 3sum action in the future after Tom blows up at this? Nice take on Hogwarts being living, by the way. Very interesting thought. I hope that Diary!Tom isn't really relased from the book by it though, and that it is only limited to being at out at hogwarts. But that's probably because I REALLY hope that this won't rewrite history. From what you've written so far with Tom changing the Knights to Death Eaters after Harry told him, and the fact that Voldemort sent him back into the past in the first place I'm assuming time can't be rewritten. And that he says everything that needs to be said. But I can't tell if your writing it that way to make us THINK that's how it is or have him go too far and change histoy. That's one of my biggest worries right now.

Gods, I love this story though. Very well written. The characterization especially. Do update soon, I've very excited about how quickly you seem to update. It would be dreadful to have to wait. This is in league with the top 5 best fanfics I have ever read. EVER. In like 9 years ever. Did I say I love you? I do.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay, thats messedd up... um does it count as cheating if you do it with a former part of your guy? Also, how come the spouse boud thingie didn't go red alert on non horcrux Tom... was it distance or the fact that Harry was doing it with technically a part of his spouse.
btw, kudos on that. I love the way your kinky mind works... and the utter speed of your up dates.
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaarghhh- And yes, stop the chapter there. At a cliffhanger! Darn you! I have to say; I love what you've done with this story. (It's actually the first real slash fic I've ever read) I don't like Harry but it's very, very interesting what you've done with the story. The plot. Usually I can pretty much predict what's going to happen but with this story (as with your other ones) I can only guess at the next plot twist.
Please(<- emphasis) update soon. (and PM too, while you're at it! xD)
person Kaitlyn
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Once I started reading this I couldn't stop.
I love it so, so, so much.
Probably because I adore Tom/Abraxas and you gave it a bit of a shout-out <3
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i lurvvvvvvvvvvvvvv your updating speed. u rock!
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I hate cliff hangers, please write more, soon! I gotta know what happens!
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. Tom my have a better handle on Grindy than we thought. Well done tom you manipulative thing u.
person misaki
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow this is amazing! please let me know when u update it. katrinadax@yahoo.com
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Harry with that big snake! and Tom you can beat Grinderwald and Dumbledoor! This is great please keep writing!