rate_review Reviews

hope this contines

Love Harry as Bambi!!! Can't wait for more!!!! Update soon!!!

I love it! There are hardly ever any good writers for this pairing and when they appear they usually just go through the same old cliches and overly cheesy lines. I mean Fenrir screaming 'mine' while screwing the brains out of Harry was sexy once but it has just been far too over done. This story was original, funny and sexy enough that it made my toes curl every time I read it. Thank you for bothering to sit down to type this out, it really has made my week. :D

I LOVE IT!!! I really hope ther is more because it's a story that I would love to continue reading plus It's very very HOT!!

I like how you've portrayed Harry and Fenrir as the way I show them is similar, I like Harry being very small and slender and Fenrir big and powerful. It's just the way I see them, so brilliant job on capturing my interest.
Will Fenrir punish Harry for what he did at the end of the chapter? Or will he be happy that his mate is responding to him? Is this story an Mpreg at all or not?
I loved Harry's Bambi outfit, the way you descibed him with the big eyes and the little nose was cute and how Harry was oblivious to how sexy the costume made him look.
Are the blonde sluts going to be killed? Or will someone take them in and shelter them so they can antagonise Harry some more, every story needs a bad guy, or girl, after all.

I love Harry/Fenrir and this is beautifully written. I do hope that you will have more for us soon.

LOVED it! Want more NOW!

Is that it? Please say you're not going to stop there!

I love that werewolves wear prey costumes for Halloween. Harry as a feisty Bambi is wonderful and I love Fenrir's look too.

Nice... Very Nice.
A few typos but still rly good. Mail me if u need a beta:)

My only complaint is Harry's height... hes 19XD he's a midget at 4'11 5'3-5'5 is way more realistic