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for Staff behaving badly

by Goddess81

schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story makes me laugh I love it!! And your author notes had me absolutely rolling, Harry dancing off to Hero, and Siruis with his pick up lines, so very funny!!! And to your darling plot bunnies I give some lettuce and even some carrots. I hope that will prompt them to hopping about madly for you.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was wonderful, interesting and hot. But, I will admit the best part to me was the end. lol Harry pouting to get his own "hero" cracked me up! Thanks again luv, HG4eva
person saxongirl
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its good to see Hermione and Severus happy, hope that Harry and Draco will follow. Looking forward to your updates
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story...
person karen
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think Harry's mistery man will likely be Draco, but I love it to be Lucius. You don't see them paired up to much.
Love the story!
person use2b2t2
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the latest chapters and the little spiff between Severus and Hermione. I do think it is a bad idea to go out on a date with a vampire. I mean who would take dinner out on a date? I have a bad feeling about this. As for the man in Harry's life I think I know who it is.

Mare
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Eric was a little ooc, but I have to admit I've been laughing my head of since he walked in... I'm usually not one for crossovers, but you made it quite funny^^ thanks for that^^
person saxongirl
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this story! looking forward to the date with Erik (u cannot not love him) but maybe Severus should show up at her date and sweep her off her feet. And I hope that Harrys mysterious crush is Draco, they are just perfect for each other
person shell
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this story from the start, but I am disappointed in the way Hermione is treating Severus. If she wanted a Gryffindor, she should go after one. Expecting Severus to go against his nature for HER pleasure is not right. I have to say it is a really big pet peeve of mine when HG/SS stories make Sev into someone who must grovel to get Hermione's attention. I agree with another poster, Hermione needs to grow up and quit playing games. She is the one playing head games, not Severus as Eric accuses. I do like his (Eric's) inclusion, you have written him in seamlessly and that is cool because some crossovers just don't mesh well. This one certainly does!!
I do like the interactions between most of the characters and I am a huge HG/SS fan, but I think what I would LOVE to see at this point is Severus find someone else and leave Hermione hanging, wondering what could have been if she had just been her normal self. She can't play the field and expect Severus to stay home, especially when she lets him know there is no relationship. She isn't in love with Severus, she's in love with the idea of having him at her feet...
I am interested to see where this goes next.
person Jean
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying your story. As for your comment that Eric is ooc, I haven't seen trueblood but have read the sookie stackhouse books and he seems in character to me. He knows when to wait his time and when to strike.