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February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHHH I have no idea what has happened but I started reading your chapters got to chapter 5 and ALL the words have been strung to =gether like a never ending coversation.....what happened?????
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December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your stories. I was a little disappointed that some of the middle chapters in this one are formatted in one big and long paragraph. It makes it very hard to read and a little bit confusing.
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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know, most of your chapters are all smashed together and hard to read. They have no line spacing. I am enjoying the story but struggling to read it as the words are all so closely spaced.
Cosmyk
Cosmyk
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You mean like Alan Rickman did in Quigley Down Under?
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
'Love Machine'. You know; that song from the old Hardee's commercial? I forgot the artist's name. 'It's raining men' by the Weather Girls?
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are a goddess after my own heart! First Eric Northman shows up, then all this talk of the GOD Alan Rickman, what else can you ply me with... (I've got Mr. Rickman's autograph tattooed on my ribs, met him at a film festival...)
Keep up the great writing, I think I've pretty much read all of your stuff at least twice now.
Keep up the great writing, I think I've pretty much read all of your stuff at least twice now.
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.
Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097
Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097
Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Snape in a duster...tasty...
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As big and good as my imagination is i nor eneyone else i can think of could write a better capter
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and cant wait for the next jusy chapter just a sugestion how about severus in an all black cowboy outfit and a black cowboy hat whith a skull ring *purrrr* and what about herms amangus therse nune of that yet