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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Maybe the big bad evil could be a vampire or a death eater?? What about fangirls? They are scary!! Anyway I love the chappie! protective jake is sooo cute!!
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I personally think its fine without the evil guy. But make sure there is a crisis
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like that there's no bad guy in your story. Because let's face it, having a bad guy show up outta nowhere has been done to death, so reading this story is like a fresh breath of air for me.
I really liked this chapter!
I really liked this chapter!
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's a good story on it's own but if you need the drama that comes with a villain than how about james or the volturi or maybe both you don't see to much of them when it comes to harry/twillight crossovers or what about a lovers triangle....introduce a vampire stalker that wants harry for his own like for example james or ero or maybe even edward because of harry's magical scent and unique talents...just a suggestion hope it helps with the creative process....great story by the way
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant and wonderful!
And i would be happy for there to be no evil in this story, id like a nice love story (with slash ;D) without all the angst, if thats what u want to write. Although angst is good with a happy ending lol. Good luck with college and work! know how u feel, i have 3 jobs :s.
Well written and looking forward to the next :)
And i would be happy for there to be no evil in this story, id like a nice love story (with slash ;D) without all the angst, if thats what u want to write. Although angst is good with a happy ending lol. Good luck with college and work! know how u feel, i have 3 jobs :s.
Well written and looking forward to the next :)
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
cute chapter, loved it :)
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Leah & Teddy are getting along.
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Hope you can update soon! My muse stole all my ideas. I can't finish a bloody thing!
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww im glad the meeting between Leah and Teddy went so well. :) Another wonderful chapter. :)
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the latest chapter. i can't wait to read more.