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Thank you for the kind words. I was surprised by Harry's request, but also noticed the large windows in his "blue" room and the promise of a tour from Draco the next day. Please continue for one more chapter, need to see Harry's last suggestion fulfilled. Re: name for sequel, I prefer something with "Pet" which to me embody's more positive emotions than "Slut". Thank you for this story - it has both surprised and delighted me.

Thanks for your explanation and your answers. I like the actual size of your chapters, I think you might want to keep them like that...I respect your desition about not writing Lucius eventhough I'm gonna miss him. I hope in a moment of time he could come back to the story. It's interesting how a bassicaly lemon story has evolved into something more. I don`t like Narcissa too much, please, don't use her very often, nee? :)

When I first saw the AN I was worried that you were giving up the story, I'm so glad that you are continuing, and I agree that a sequel makes sense. I am looking forward to how you explore the relationship. I think it would be understandable for a spy like Snape working for both sides and constantly at the whims of both masters would want some control and the opposite for Harry. Growing up with everyone dependant on him to save them, I can imangine him wanting to feel safe and secure with someone looking out for him and taking control. In that vain I like that you let Lucius go from the pairing as it wouldn't fit into a safe, sane and consensual relationship.

The chapter lengths can define themselves. I suppose asking for 3000 words every other day is too much? Thought so. I like the longer chapters but if the chapters pan out shorter then I think you should write however it comes to you and don't force it as it could ruin the storytelling.

Anyhow, those are just my thoughts. Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to your post tommorrow.

I really like the fast updates, I hope you keep them up!

Oh thank merlien! I would hate for them to get a new pet...anyways good luck on the new story...will you put out another authors note telling us the new stories title or is it just going to appeare? oh and if all else fails just make a chapter you thought you could put on here (or take the talking with harry chapter) and transer it into the next story it some times most times work lol.
yeah thanks for telling us
Kit

Personally unless a fic has a really really good summary, an interesting title or comes highly recomended I do not read a story that averages less then 1000 words per-chapter. But that isn't upfront information on AFF.net. It is mostly because I like to read and don't want to get hooked on a fic with only three short chapters I want to have a bit of reading time. So I'll take any amount of updates since you've already got me hooked.

I think you should start the next fic the morning after when Harry wakes up in Snape's bed. maybe have Harry try to be a bit forward on the sexual sense, and either allow it or have Snape ascert his authority and tell him not until they discuss the terms of their arangement. It should follow with a breakast with Draco and discussion of terms of their relationship.

This would set up the basis for their uture relationship and allow readers to see how the story is most likely headed minus any plot twists. That way they won't get angry because they don't like the punishment harry recieves 10 chapters down the road. Because punishment posibilities will have already been laid out.

I also think it is a great place to start since, making up a contract is the height of willingness and acceptence in a D/s relationship, really the defining actor between reluctent and willing.

Cannot wait to see where you go with this, good luck!

I don't really care how long the chapters are just as long as you update. As for Voldie you can bring him in as not a good guy but a guy fighting for what he beleive in. That dark or different is not nessary evil. Could be an interesting point of argument for Harry and the others.

I can't wait to see what they get up to next! This is rapidly becoming one of my favorite WIPs :)

Still liking it. :). Hope that Lucius's new pet ( whoever that is) and Harry will get to perform together.

Yay!! this fic is turning out so well. I think you should end it here. And post more under a sequel since it is obvious that Harry is no longer reluctant. By no means stop this plot line though. I think you should post the rest under a different name "Willing Whore" perhaps. And if you do that please make it abundently clear that you made a sequel, so I do not miss it. Either if you keep writing this plot I'll keep reading this plotline. Keep up the good work.