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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOT! And i like that harry and hermione are not fucking like pro's, but are inexperienced (makes it more real)
"Her hymen had all but been destroyed by the broom-riding lessons in her first year, but it still hurt. "
Wow, i don't know what she has done in the broom-riding lessons but she must have done something rather wild to destroy her hymen :O
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"Her hymen had all but been destroyed by the broom-riding lessons in her first year, but it still hurt. "
Wow, i don't know what she has done in the broom-riding lessons but she must have done something rather wild to destroy her hymen :O
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June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Please continue. Can't wait to see what other moments can be used for such entertaining and time passing acts
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice story...
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That was sooo rushed. Are you kidding? I'm all for smut, but where's the build up? That's the interesting part. The sex itself can only be written so many ways and very few can do it well.
I'd suggest you give future chapters a lot more effort.
I'd suggest you give future chapters a lot more effort.
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
heh, the ending of part 2 made me laugh keep it up
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far.
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was really great, i look forward to the next one.
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like i like keep it coming
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December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very Good. could be a little longer. Loved the last couple of lines. Full marks!
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excellent! this is like the story supplement but for H/Hr only! love it! this has potential!