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for Precious Mudblood

by magentasouth

schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting so quickly. It is somehow easier to take knowing that she is making some choices on her own, even as her ultimate freedom of choice has been taken from her. As Hermione, it is difficult to think of Snape as being the same kind of evil as the others. It was great that you had her put the blame (for her breakdown) where it belonged. He needed to know that HE was the one that broke her because she cared for him and expected more from him, thinking that he cared about her. AND now they are going to make her prove herself, when she could destroy all of them if she had chosen to do so. Interesting... p
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas and thanks for the lovely updates! Ohhhhh that damn Harry! I'm surprised Hermione hasn't succumbed to "that" place again, and it wouldn't be a surprise if she did despite Evil!Harry's attempts to force her to be his. Gods, there is just..... no choice for her. I wonder if she will try killing herself again. Such a tense situation, and I like the reference to Bella. I suppose, after what Hermione's been through, it wouldn't take a whole hell of a lot more to make her into something like Bella.

Can't wait for more! *smirks* And poor Severus.... I think my heart breaks for him more than any of them, but I am partial to the Potions master anyway. Is Harry going to find out about her "bond" with Rodolphus? Shit, don't keep us hanging!
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If they could just figure out the necklace, she could take out the whole group herself. And wouldn't Harry, Ron, and Draco be surprised? Wonder if RoLe would leave and find her, not returning to LV? What of Snape? Is he just telling her things knowing that LV reads her and his minds? Can't wait to see where this goes. p
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Crap. I am getting this horrible fear that this is all a part of her break with reality while in the cell or checked out again during the revel to iniate her. You have had so many people included in the story and all have motives and backhanded ways of dealing AND that it is just plain scary. Looking forward to finding out which way this goes. If it is truly what is happening, I find myself rooting for LV and SS. p
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I guess I am the only one that finds this so unbearably sad. I skipped through some of the last chapter and hoped that she would find just one person on her side to take care of her, but instead, they have destroyed her. It would be nice to think that LV is just trying to teach her a lesson so that she will appreciate him, but even someone brilliant and brave can be broken eventually. Except that he would be so severely punished, I with that RoLe would finish her off. This may end up being too real where there is no decent ending, much less a relatively happy one. This is why I usually try to read complete stories (if they end too bad, I don't want to struggle with characters that are brought to life in the really good stories). p
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I created an account just so I could review this story! Man I think im in love! lol. This is one of the best LV/HG stories I have read (you have totally beaten Nersy's stories!) I just have to say I find myself checking to see if you have updated again and again b/c Im addicted to this story!
Looking forward to more chapters!
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! Such a twisted, wonderful, horrid, gorgeous tragedy..... an acid trip mixed with a roller coaster and Voldemort's idea of the prefect family. How wonderfully fucked up I love it!
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What Harry is alive? From atom particals? Now I'm lost. God just when it looked like everything was going to work out. Damn the order of the fucking chicken.
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay More updates. Poor Hermione stuck her foot in it again. Though frankly if I was in that situation I'd probably atempt to take my own life. Sitting in a dark cell like that is defintly not good for my sanity. Though this teasing is getting out of hand. Hermione needs to let someone take her virginty already. anyhow. keep them coming I love it so far. of up to chapter 17.
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay yay yay more updates! Thanks so much for responding too :) Btw i may or may not be a little addicted to your story... <.< i promise i'm not trying to be creepy or anything. But while I wait for more posts i flip through other stories and they just aren't the same. But you posted! And i'm happy! Thanks for being awesome ^-^