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for Precious Mudblood

by magentasouth

schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.I just. You know, there is no way I can even put down a coherent thought such a rollercoaster here. Can't wait for more, love love love love it!

Like Lady Ga Ga says, when I read this fic I feel like I'm caught in a bad romance!!ele
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've really been enjoying your story. It's well written with a creative and twisty plot. That said, I really must draw the line at Ron. UGH! One can only hope that being forced into any sex act with the red git will be enough for her magic to overpower the necklace. Please please get us back to LV and the delightful death eaters ASAP. At least they're all intelligent and self-aware. I did find the comparison between Ron and Severus interesting. Unfortunately, it's just one more reason she really should NOT forgive Severus. Despite her love for him, it strains credibility that she'd forgive him after he slapped the necklace on her the second time. Looking forward to the next update.
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I keep hoping the next chapter might magically appear...
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better! And the Lord Harry Hermione and Ron sandwich was just gross! So glad that didn't work out! The original Vold, Serv, and Hermione was much hotter! I cant wait to see what happens to Harry now!
Keep up he great work! LOVE the twist and turns that this story brings and I also want a Draco ferret!
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am very, very happy Hermione is back with the evilz. Brilliantly done. Damn Voldy, can't he see that Hermione loves him? Just let her remove Harry's mark already you snakey git! *can't wait for her, Sev and Voldie to get it on* but I'm a perv LOL
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow you're updating faster than I can read! Looking forward to reading chapter 36.... Holy shit the sorting of the children broke my heart, especially that 3 year old little girl just crying, the kids clinging together, the small boy crying hysterically. So real and vile and shows how much Hermione has become just like them, justifying it in her head with her dwindling, useless Gryffindor justice still caring about what Lord Potter is doing.

Severus needs to get a move on .... :0)..... I love this story well done and keep it up, keep writing you're fucking fab!!!
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm up too chapter 37 and while I love the twist and turns you have going on here I have to warn you not to write your self into a never ending story. I also have to point out that I am sick of Hermione being powerless. That necklace has to come off all ready. now that my little rant is done please keep the updates coming.
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay - back where she belongs. Looking forward to LV having a little 'conversation' with Harry. Also hoping Sev gets creative in his efforts to remove Harry's mark from Ron.
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap 34 - Sev really is behaving like a moody teenager. Sigh. Tom, however, is rather awesome.
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 37 - Draco raises an excellent point. Why, exactly, is Hermione suddenly so irresistable to all these men? Hope there's an answer to that soon. Also hope she's going to get her power back soon. Befuddled, weak Hermione is starting to grate a bit. Readers love her because she's smart and strong and often brutally honest. Being pragmatic doesn't detract from that, but pathetic going along to get along eventually does. Please find a way to snap her out of it soon. Finally, please don't think this means i don't like your story - I do. I'm just wary that it may be headed down a path that will ultimately be less satisfying than it could be.

LOVE the blitzkrieg updating!!!!!