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Dearest Magentasouth,

I wanted to let you know that I was so enthralled with this story, that I have devoured it over the last few weeks. To the exclusion of all the other stories that I am currently reading!!!

The story is an awesome, riveting, and well written story; and of course, the SEX!! Your dynamics with the Voldemort/Hermione relationship in this story and Captive Audience is amazing. I love that you keep Voldemort as an essentially

What a great story. I am soo curious about what happens next in both timelines. I really miss Voldy, Severus and Rodolphus and am hoping that somehow she ends up with them again. They cant really be dead.. Right? I'm looking forward to learning how she woke up in the present not remembering that she resurrected Lucius or anything about that night...I get soo frustrated every time these dark wizards block her use of her magic... I am also wondering just how many wizards are going to be at her mercy by the end of this story... You write the characters very well and considering how many characters are in this story , that is no small accomplishment. Your characters have defining personalities and depth and they are believable and consistent.. Please post another chapter soon!!!!

I'm starting to really like this Ducat Uriel character. He seems incredibly interesting. The way you wrote his story was compelling, and very vivid. It was a nice change from Hermione's POV. I can't wait to see how you're going to connect everything in the past to everything in the future, and how Dumbles vs Grindilocks is going to go down. Awesome!
And fiou! This story took me soooo long to read, I wasted 2 days reading this instead of studying for my looming midterm. But I don't regret it.
PS: I noticed that Hermione kept saying that only Tom has ever had her in the rear... is she lying? or has she (or maybe you?) forgotten her menage a trois with Rudolphus and Lucius? ...or did I misunderstand that scene altogether?

Tried to submit a review but not sure if it went through so I apologize if this is a repeat. Just finished reading the story again and it is still my favorite fanfiction. The characters, the plot, the mystery, just all of it is great. Reading it again I tried to look out for clues that might help me figure out whats going on in the later chapters but alas I'm still at a loss. I hope you will update again soon as I am dyingggg to read more. I will try to wait patiently until the next chapters or up :).

Utterly confused... Well, no, not entirely. I've spent the past 3 days addicted and I mean ADDICTED to reading this story, so please don't take this as a flame but a few things -- it's doesn't need to have that much gore or sex. Yes, I know this is AFF, but it doesn't seem like a PWP type of story. There is an actual STORY here, but sometimes I think the unnecessary violence, gore and sex make it hard to navigate. Also, it seems you've created quite the plot here, but my question is, do you have the ending? And it seems that it story is going in circles. LV/HG in HER time, then with HG/HP and you made him into a psycho rapist (yet, Voldey is the normal one in this story which still kind of baffles me if HP is supposed to be inherently good), then back to LV/HG, throw in some LM/RStg/SS/LV/HG and I'm just whoaaa, the throw in Draco, and then kill of LM, resurrect him and throw Hermione back in time to a younger LV who apparently was sexually abused as a child, and if that wasn't enough Slughorn is a child predator and Hermione is being stalked by the OTHER Dark Wizard ... ta da! ... GG! I skipped over a of the violence, not going to lie about that -- but I do like the plot, I just wish that it was a little more structured or was leading to an ending rather than another time-turning-character twisting plot loop! Sorry, but it irks me. I feel like there about 3 individual stories that could have been put up here with beginnings and endings.
Now, I really like the complexities that you created in your own universe for LV, SS and DM especially. I find it interesting and atypical to the usual fanfics in the HP Universe. I really like the plot too, but like I said, I think it could be 3 stories, if not 2 stories with a beginning and a solid ending. I like your interpretation of Abraxas too. That's always the interesting thing about time turner fics too, is how you create characters that were simply mentioned and hinted at in canon. I really enjoy your Abraxas. I think you write him the way I imagined him to be as well. It's okay that you don't like Ginny, I don't either, so kudos to just making her a traitor and getting rid of her. I absolutely choked with laughter when Draco called Hermione's S.P.E.W "vomit." I also was cracking up with giggles at his wanting to stay a pet ferret that LV had to conjure a cat basket for him. I found it utterly amusing too. Absolutely amusing. Oh and the first time you did the LV/DM/SS/HG pairing at the beginning, I was laughing a lot at the polyjuiced DM as LV... hysterical!!!
All in all, I do like this story, sooooooooooooo I hope you don't take this as a loathing flame, because it isn't.
...That being said, UPDATE and COMPLETE the story!!! Pretty please :) I want to know what happens!!! :D

I am actually on chapter 64, but I thought I would leave a review, because I am HORRIBLE about not reviewing every chapter I read.

I have spent the last...*counts days on hand* week reading, and I'm conflicted. Don't count this as a "flame" review, because it's not. I would LOVE to get my hands on this fic and Beta the crap out of it, because the way you have dialogue set up was making my eyes cross, and it became a little confusing during the first 20 chapters. XD
I really enjoyed reading up until the Harry rapes Hermione part...I kind of skipped over those chapters because I despise Harmony anything. *blush* I feel that maybe your characterization of Severus and Voldemort and Hermione are...like they flip-flop a little from one extreme to another, and you could have gone more in depth about your background stories regarding Severus and Rodolphus (thank you, btw for introducing me to the wonders and sex appeal of vampire!Rodolphus *fans blushing face* muy caliente! XD ) And the over all flow of the story so far could use a little tweaking because it seems to be better structured in some chapters and rushed in others.
Other than that, I am enjoying the fic (though some Harry/Hermione scenes I skip over). Please update soon! XD

Sincerely,
brightneeBee

OMG OMG!!!! I CAN'T believe when i opened the adultfanfiction.net, i really seen your story has been in the top of the charts of HG and Voldemort stories. i really really have been waiting for this update for an entire YEAR!!! i am really excited and anxious and really magenta south YOU ARE THE BEST AUTHOR that stories i've ever read, EVER!!! I'm really grateful to know this story last year, no, i think it was in the month of december when I first read the first chapter of precious mudblood, and i never, i mean never ever getting tired or bored to read this story over and over again!!! i know you've been very busy in this year because of your work, but truly, i want to say how thankful i am when i see you updating this story. thank you magenta south, you really made my day!!! XD XD XD i9 really can not wait to read chapter 76. please, if you have a leisure time, and if you feel like you want to write this story, i will be very grateful to know this magenta south... so, finally, once again i wanted to say thank you for sacrificing your leisure time to continue precious mudblood's chapter. and good luck with your job always.

OMG YESSSSSS!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! YESSS!!! You updated!!! Thank you thank you thank you!! This just made me so happy! XD I think I've read this fic at least 15 times from start to finish while waiting for the next update.
Muahh! Muah!!! Hugs and kisses! I am so happy!
mkay... I'm off to reading the new chapter. XD

Having read an obscene amount of fanfics in a number of fandoms, I can honestly say, this is my favorite story ever, and I am so excited to see it updated. It was a great chapter, and it was particularly interesting to read the Hermione/Draco bit because I had honestly forgotten that plot line completely. Looking forward to the updates of all your stories!

oh, that was wonderful... I was so happy, when I found new chapter - please, go on... I can