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for The First Horcrux

by magentasouth

schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd also like to add, Luc is one seriously sick puppy and polijuice as a torture device is ingenious... fiendish, but ingenious. Your imagination, subconcious whaatever is a scary, scary place and I'm enjoying it. ^^
I feel sorry for Sev too, it's gotta be hellish on him watching his godson put through that. I don't even want to think what's going to happen to Draco if/when he fails his task. Can't wait to see how Horcrux Tom effects that.
I had another thought as well, If Horcrux Tom got Harry's virginity, would he be able to use that for soemthing or in something besides the obvious pleasure of deflowering Harry... like I said, just a thought.
person MrE-Quecky
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, loved :D
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That last bit was a serious tease! I actually hope there is a Tom/LV!!
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is also a great story! I prefer That which we make for ourselves more, but this one is good too! I love how scheming Tom is. Rarely do people master his POV, but you have!
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sux to be Draco. Still, how'd he get him to switch from terror to lust so fast?
some how i prefer him with Harry... Harry he gets to break in himself, inspite of Harry's wishes.
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so glad u updated ive read it 3 times lol .... i adore it. cant wait for more.... i was up at 4 am thought i would check real quick to see if any updates and i saw yours and i well stayed up till 5am reading it. looking forward to your next update
person Arbitrary Doom
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
....very shiny......it took a while to bring harry in but i must say it was worth the wait.......and unrequited Drarry is the best kind.......the only thing i was a bit iffy on is whether harry is trying to lure tom into a false sense of security or if he really is that pathetic...at any rate great job and please continue
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Tom is so very... slytherin. It'll be interesting when he learns Harry in a Hrcrux himself... I hope Harry wakes to the fact that Dumbles is a manipulative old sod... How old are they all in this? Wha year and such.
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just longing to know whats going to happen............. sigh i miss this story... im emailing you muse right now lol
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still hoping for a chapter soon..... just wanted to express my longing ...............sigh lol