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April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, here I am, adding to your reviews in order to convey my desire that you continue this soon. You've left us with something of a cliffhanger.
Once again, poor Draco. I can't believe how sorry I'm feeling for the git in this, but at the same time, as he's cowering in abject terror with the idea that he might have to endure another punishment, I still see it from Tom's point-of-view--that shit gets old fast.
I feel confident that Hermione is going to think up some way to get around Tom's limitations on her power of speech. I think Harry might get wise after a while...she's got to be a mess outside of her dorm. I can't imagine she'll be able to hide her distress from the boys for long the worse Tom gets.
I do like it when Tom one-ups Snape. Damn, that's satisfying.
Once again, poor Draco. I can't believe how sorry I'm feeling for the git in this, but at the same time, as he's cowering in abject terror with the idea that he might have to endure another punishment, I still see it from Tom's point-of-view--that shit gets old fast.
I feel confident that Hermione is going to think up some way to get around Tom's limitations on her power of speech. I think Harry might get wise after a while...she's got to be a mess outside of her dorm. I can't imagine she'll be able to hide her distress from the boys for long the worse Tom gets.
I do like it when Tom one-ups Snape. Damn, that's satisfying.
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted you to know that i was thinking about your awesome story...... all day today lol makes sound as if i have no life. sometimes i dont lol cant wait for that Tom and Harry "Moment"!
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've really been enjoying this story. You really delve into a lot of the more fascinating elements of Tom's character and the nature of the Horcruxes themselves. You also vividly draw out the characters of Harry, Hermione, and Draco, as seen through the eyes of a young Tom so that they are at once familiar, but more interesting, texturalized. We share Tom's fixation with them. Well, perhaps Hermione and definitely Harry, but Draco....I don't know how I feel about him suddenly getting center stage. I so dislike him, usually, but the events held in the memory during Ch. 13 were so disturbing that I couldn't help but feel sympathetic. I mean, I've read a lot of pretty transgressive stuff, so that most attempts in fanfiction rarely shock me, but I think I might have been a little green from the description of Draco's poor backside. And Lucius' apparent lust for his own son, especially after witnessing such a violent rape----ewwww. I'm a little squicked. But no matter, no matter....
You are obviously quite drawn to the idea of two versions of Tom/Voldemort interacting.
I have to admit, I gave your other Harry/Voldemort story a shot, but I so grew to dislike Harry I had to give it up. He's my favorite character, so I'm easily rankled when he's presented in a way that I find weak or out of character. But I really like your Harry in this. His attempts at outwitting Tom by seduction were facile, at best, but I have to give him an O for effort. I'm quite enjoying their conversations, as well as Tom's constant baiting of Hermione. I'm really curious if you're actually going to get all three of them together or not. Tom obviously has a boner for them both. And what with your admitted interest in H/Hr....well, this could be pretty impressive if you pull it off.
One thing about the letter writ upon Draco's back---it reminded me heavily of a film by Peter Greenaway called The Pillow Book. You should check it out if you haven't seen it already.
Oh, and Harry is loooaads better looking than Draco.
And judging by your distaste of the Weasley lot, I am guessing that Harry never got together with Ginny in this story? Seeing as Draco mentioned that Harry's never dated, it seems unlikely. But as much as I'm not terribly fond of the Book Weasleys either, I will admit to a certain dark pleasure in seeing Ginny with Voldemort/Tom. Wondering if she'll turn up anywhere.
Your Voldemort descriptions had me tickled, particularly during the bedroom scene with Draco. We obviously see the Dark Lord very similarly, as I have written him in one story not too far off from how you've depicted the snake man. Amusing.
You are obviously quite drawn to the idea of two versions of Tom/Voldemort interacting.
I have to admit, I gave your other Harry/Voldemort story a shot, but I so grew to dislike Harry I had to give it up. He's my favorite character, so I'm easily rankled when he's presented in a way that I find weak or out of character. But I really like your Harry in this. His attempts at outwitting Tom by seduction were facile, at best, but I have to give him an O for effort. I'm quite enjoying their conversations, as well as Tom's constant baiting of Hermione. I'm really curious if you're actually going to get all three of them together or not. Tom obviously has a boner for them both. And what with your admitted interest in H/Hr....well, this could be pretty impressive if you pull it off.
One thing about the letter writ upon Draco's back---it reminded me heavily of a film by Peter Greenaway called The Pillow Book. You should check it out if you haven't seen it already.
Oh, and Harry is loooaads better looking than Draco.
And judging by your distaste of the Weasley lot, I am guessing that Harry never got together with Ginny in this story? Seeing as Draco mentioned that Harry's never dated, it seems unlikely. But as much as I'm not terribly fond of the Book Weasleys either, I will admit to a certain dark pleasure in seeing Ginny with Voldemort/Tom. Wondering if she'll turn up anywhere.
Your Voldemort descriptions had me tickled, particularly during the bedroom scene with Draco. We obviously see the Dark Lord very similarly, as I have written him in one story not too far off from how you've depicted the snake man. Amusing.
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Delightful as always. Much draco action yumm yumm and of corse im going to b thinking about all the wonderful things that will posibly happing soon. cant wait for more tom and harry yummie goodnes. i feel so spoiled you have been updating so often i never wANT YOU TO STOP. drat the real world sometimes
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is interesting how similar yet different Tom and Voldemort are. I love the juxtaposition! Also, Snape should know better than to underestimate the mini-Dark Lord! It's going to come back to bit him in the butt! Great chapter!!
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Guess it's more satisfying playing with toys you've broken yourself. Though, I'm not sure if Harry will be reduced to toy to easily. I hope not, Slyth as Tom is he needs someone who can keep his interest.
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really lovin this story, especially the H/T interaction and T/D interaction. Draco trying so hard to make Tom happy is just great, but I'm really looking forward to more electrifying moments with Harry.
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this chapter must have been really hard to write. Draco hurts so much... Loved the ache!
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously wicked.
I feel sorry for Hermione though, and (much to my surprise) Draco too.
Young Tom Riddle is certainly an intelligent and engaging sociopath. I wonder how long it will take him to realize Harry Potter is a Horcrux as well.
I feel sorry for Hermione though, and (much to my surprise) Draco too.
Young Tom Riddle is certainly an intelligent and engaging sociopath. I wonder how long it will take him to realize Harry Potter is a Horcrux as well.
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WoW! another update so soon i feel spoiled. lol. oh my goodness so tom got turned on by LV did he. Well i kinda did to but thats nor here nor there. I do hope that he and harry will have a great romance and if that does enclude LV than the hotter the better, but im just so happy that ur updating again and can not wait to see what happens.