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Gosh, so you're finally updating this one, eh? I was surprised to see it when I clicked on AFF's first page, I had imagined that you'd dropped this story in favor of finishing the others.

I had to go back to the previous chapter to figure out what was happening, but even still, I couldn't understand how Tom suffered so much damage from a simple Stunning spell. Had Severus cast a few more after the boy blacked out? And what of the spell to put Draco into some kind of parseltongue-induced coma, what did that achieve? You have so many tricks and ideas up Tom's sleeve that it's hard to follow them all.

I have to say--the way both Draco and Harry ogle Tom's pre-teen body as something they are attracted to is a bit disturbing. I can buy Harry being fixated with Tom because of the actual person, but for Harry to detach Tom's personality and focus on the appearance as something now desirable makes me wonder about Harry's strength of character and what may have happened to it.

It was amusing to see Tom taken down a peg, however, by Dumbledore. I love that he had to 'confess' just what he felt for Harry. Made him sound a bit petulant and childish, like the actual thirteen year-old he appears to be. I'm curious to know how Dumbledore will act on this. Will he keep Harry away from Tom, not realizing that Hermione is also a target? It can be stifling reading this from Tom's pov, because we can never know what's going on outside of the damn room/prison that Riddle is kept in! I want to witness a conversation between Harry and Hermione at some point, see if they are comparing any notes. Or are they both just keeping everything themselves in silent suffering like maddening Gryffindors? Hope you update this one a bit sooner next time. You have so much crammed into each paragraph that its very easy to forget a lot of stuff when a lot of time has elapsed. I would re-read it from the beginning, but I have fics to write! Look forward to more.

wb. been a while neh, but then these stories are so complicated plot wise, i suppose it's hard to keep it flowing smoothly. Poor tom, being truth potioned sux. still, it's interesting how he feels about Harry. Would it be disastrous if voldi the elder were to discover Harry's horcrux? Things are going to be a lot tougher on Tom now, i bet. He's really going to feel this screw up and how.
btw, the pic link didn;'t work when i tried clicking. not sure what the prob there is.

Dumbledore is the ultimate troll. He just had to get that goddamn twinkle in his eye! I can't wait to see what he makes of all of this. And holy crap did that curse Snape cast on Tom sound truly awful!! And what is this? Could Harry be... jealous?? Great chapter!

read something on someone else review that I have to respectfully disagree about... I really like how we only really know Tom's POV. It really creates an atmosphere and I can understand how trapped Tom feels. Plus not knowing what is truly going on outside the room gives me the same anxiety Tom must feel and it really goes to show his genius that he is still able to hold somewhat of his own.

Please continue your story I love it so much it would be a total shame if all your fans never get to finish the story.

Oh please update soon I'm dying to find out what happens next. This Tom is such a horn dog but it works really well with his personallity. I'm so wondering if he'll learn to be a better person through his interactions with Draco, Harry, and Hermione, and if he'll end up fighting his evil self or if he'll end up taking his older self out just to be head villian in the end anyways. I really hope he falls for Harry and wants to help Harry defeat his bad self. I really feel bad for poor Draco and can't stand what happened to him. Now does he have unwanted feelings towards both Harry and Tom? I hope to read the next chapter soon your new fan CJB.

i really do hope all is well! just wanted you to know i havent forgot about my fav storys and i look forward to your plans for them... well im sure others check this site almost dayly lk me to see if you have updated...

wow i cant belive its almost a month and im still checking everyday for a update. should i go two days? NEvER! lol jk. i hope you update soon. hopefully your muse sends you a hott hott dream and all you can think about is a hansome young Harry and a Horny young tom. lol hope all is well

Great story! I really like your Tom!

Hi!

Great story. Can't wait tored next - 15th - chapter. #^_^#