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Really hope you update this!

This was a very good story. I liked the way the rape scene in chapter 7 was written, it was tasteful. Some can be very poorly written, this one was very well written.

AHH UPDATE PLEASE <3 <3

This is a really good story. I hope you update it at somepoint. Thank you for sharing it here!

Well done!
Hope, you'll update fic soon)

Very well done. I like how you portray Rabastian and am interested in how this will go. Hope to see an update. Thank you.

Excellent story so far.

Please continue.

love Sonia :)

Well there is no going back now!?!?!?! Hermoine should have told him that they had not "done the dead" before. But now she must face the consequences and the fact that she distroyed the contraceptive potion.

Oh, the plot thickens!!

This is really interesting so far - much more complex and subtle than I thought it would be! I was intrigued by the angle you took with Rabastan - all the conflicting feelings he feels for his big brother. I'll definitely keep reading!

OMG they're going to shag!! I can't wait (I luv smut)!! Maybe it'll be good for Hermione--who knows? Thanks for updating so quickly--I take what I can get while I'm free from Professors and homework for the holidays.

By the way, I would be more than happy to help you with grammatical errors. I'm not a professional but I do find that having even a ten year old read a story with fresh eyes helps a lot. Since I'm a Communications students, I'm sure I can do a lot better than a ten year old. Just click on my profile--my email is there if you so choose to take my help.

Until the next chapter!

Love, Hugs, and Kisses
Koolgirl18