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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter !I couldn
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your story!
About the last chapter, is it some kind of "fairy land" spell? I noticed that when she wished for her parents, they came back. Maybe one final "lesson" from Voldemort to show her that even if things go exactly like she wants them to, she will never be happy?
Just one of the many heories that are going through my mind.^^
Anyway, good job, keep it up!
About the last chapter, is it some kind of "fairy land" spell? I noticed that when she wished for her parents, they came back. Maybe one final "lesson" from Voldemort to show her that even if things go exactly like she wants them to, she will never be happy?
Just one of the many heories that are going through my mind.^^
Anyway, good job, keep it up!
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story has been amazing. Keep updating. I'm getting that nagging sensation that a certain dark lord isn't really dead. Just doesn't add up, I mean he was acting strange before the final battle and I'm thinking that's why. I think he's alive and possibly Draco, not sure yet. I do beleive that the only reason he hasn't showed up is because he's punishing Hermione for killing him. What better punishment then denying her what she wants. I don't think Hermione should have Stockholme Syndrome *forgive spelling I stayed up to read this all* just because I don't think it fits with what Hermione is feeling. Yay for keeping her humanity and also for giving her that touch of darkness <3 but mostly golden stars to you for not a fluffy Voldemort.
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked! I have been since the first chapter, I normally don't give review's mainly because I don't get hooked into a story this easily, but I have to say I am HOOKED! I am begging you PLEASE update this more! I can't wait to see how it all play's out! Thank you so much for a story worth waiting for!
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope your mother will gets well soon! And everything will get back on track in your life.
This two were amazing chaptersXD
I am sad what happened with Voldemort BUT I can
This two were amazing chaptersXD
I am sad what happened with Voldemort BUT I can
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy fudge monkies. I keep having this feeling that everythings a trick but. . . blah. >;O
I'm not even going to think and just wait for your update because otherwise my mind will explode from thinking too much.
I'm not even going to think and just wait for your update because otherwise my mind will explode from thinking too much.
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! I love your voldemort! amazing really.. Honestly I cried from this last chapter! Made me so emotional to think of voldemort dead for some reason..
and what's draco planning? fireside chats what?!
and what's draco planning? fireside chats what?!
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grrr... I had this all typed and forgot to copy... you can guess the rest, can't you? YES! It vanished when I pressed submit. GRRR!
Anyway... trying to remember some of what I wrote.
First... why do I get the feeling he's not dead? *sniggers* Because of who is writing the story? LOL
So, the beating and his off demeanour during (according to Hermione), well, that's explained now if we take under account he planned to "die". He made sure she looked like a "proper" victim to the Order and co. So, Hermione using Avada on him had to be a part of his multiple variables chart (explains why he wanted her to kill her parents).
And I am wondering if that was Draco in the hospital; he was so OOC that I am guessing some polyjuiced person came to check on how his plotting was working out, and well, he has to watch out for HIS woman, doesn't he? *sniggers*
Still, him having her kill her parents ... well, that is going to bite him in the arse even if he needed it to make her assist to kill him. How is that possibly not going to be a block to their future relationship? I was surprised she didn't even mention their deaths to Harry. It would've helped with her "I don't want to talk about things" and "I am too traumatised", which she clearly is.
I'd watch out with using Stockholm Syndrom as an excuse for her demeanour though. That term became popular use after an incident that was later deemed to be the exception to the rule. I don't think you have the right circumstances present for it to apply for your story here. Serious conditioning, yes. Stockholm Syndrom, hell no.
Well, crap, I worded it all better the first time around. But I suppose this has to do, now. T_T
Best of luck with your masters and I hope your mom feels better soon.
Anyway... trying to remember some of what I wrote.
First... why do I get the feeling he's not dead? *sniggers* Because of who is writing the story? LOL
So, the beating and his off demeanour during (according to Hermione), well, that's explained now if we take under account he planned to "die". He made sure she looked like a "proper" victim to the Order and co. So, Hermione using Avada on him had to be a part of his multiple variables chart (explains why he wanted her to kill her parents).
And I am wondering if that was Draco in the hospital; he was so OOC that I am guessing some polyjuiced person came to check on how his plotting was working out, and well, he has to watch out for HIS woman, doesn't he? *sniggers*
Still, him having her kill her parents ... well, that is going to bite him in the arse even if he needed it to make her assist to kill him. How is that possibly not going to be a block to their future relationship? I was surprised she didn't even mention their deaths to Harry. It would've helped with her "I don't want to talk about things" and "I am too traumatised", which she clearly is.
I'd watch out with using Stockholm Syndrom as an excuse for her demeanour though. That term became popular use after an incident that was later deemed to be the exception to the rule. I don't think you have the right circumstances present for it to apply for your story here. Serious conditioning, yes. Stockholm Syndrom, hell no.
Well, crap, I worded it all better the first time around. But I suppose this has to do, now. T_T
Best of luck with your masters and I hope your mom feels better soon.
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh I had a feeling something like this happened. I think Voldie knew that this was the only way out....I think thats what the arithmancy equation was all about. He needed to hurt Hermione enough that she would "kill" him. But i'm going to go out on a limb and guess that she didn't actually kill him. I think that Draco is actually Voldemort and Hermione is going to figure it out pretty quick! I love this story!!!
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*POSTING THIS REVIEW FOR GEOFEO!*
Hi, since Geofeo (from grangerenchanted) doesn't have an account here and you don't allow anon reviews, I told her I'd post her reviews for her. Enjoy. xx Nerys. (PS mine is pending. I am just swamped now)
Geofeo's review:
"The story is amazing.
I think Hermione has Stockholm Syndrome. The story is one which is completely likely to happen if we put aside the last books. I never understood the mistakes Voldemort made in the books they are not like him or at least the person I see him to be. You write him brilliantly. He is in character.
To me the best part of the story is the psychological and emotional part.
Chapter 10:
I like that even Voldemort has a hidden side to him. I like that he is capable feeling grief for Nagini. Most just assume he has no feelings at all. But that can
Hi, since Geofeo (from grangerenchanted) doesn't have an account here and you don't allow anon reviews, I told her I'd post her reviews for her. Enjoy. xx Nerys. (PS mine is pending. I am just swamped now)
Geofeo's review:
"The story is amazing.
I think Hermione has Stockholm Syndrome. The story is one which is completely likely to happen if we put aside the last books. I never understood the mistakes Voldemort made in the books they are not like him or at least the person I see him to be. You write him brilliantly. He is in character.
To me the best part of the story is the psychological and emotional part.
Chapter 10:
I like that even Voldemort has a hidden side to him. I like that he is capable feeling grief for Nagini. Most just assume he has no feelings at all. But that can